Keys— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar (plural forms and verb agreement), make the response more natural and concise, and add a linking phrase or brief reason. Keep it within 1–3 sentences. For example, correct plurals (keys), subject-verb agreement (bring → bring, brings → bring), and replace vague phrase "my accessories" with a specific word like "locker" or "bike" if appropriate.

例: No, I don't carry many keys. I usually carry two or three keys because I need them for my apartment door and my locker.

提案: Fix tense consistency and clarity, avoid repetition, and give a specific consequence or brief detail. Use past tense consistently (felt, couldn't) and connect sentences with a linking word like "so" or "therefore." Limit to 2–3 clear sentences.

例: Yes, I lost my keys in a park last year, so I felt very frustrated. I couldn't get into my room and had to call a friend to let me in.

提案: Clarify the meaning and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (No, I don't often forget my keys) then add a brief example or frequency phrase (rarely, once in a while). Avoid fragmented clauses and use linking words like "but" to contrast.

例: No, I don't often forget my keys, but occasionally I leave them at work or in the car, and then I have to wait for someone to bring them.

提案: Correct word choice and grammar, be more explicit about the condition and give a reason. Use conditionals correctly (If the neighbour is trustworthy) and explain why (for emergencies). Keep it to 1–2 sentences and use linking words like "if" and "because."

例: Yes, I think it's fine to leave a key with a neighbour if they are trustworthy, because they can help in an emergency or if I get locked out.

× No, I don't always bring lot of key with me.

✓ No, I don't always bring a lot of keys with me.

Missing article 'a' before 'lot' and incorrect singular 'key' instead of plural 'keys'. Use 'a lot of' plus plural noun for countable items: 'a lot of keys'. Also 'with me' is acceptable.

× I usually brings two or three key with me which I need to unlock my room and my accessories.

✓ I usually bring two or three keys with me which I need to unlock my room and my accessories.

Subject 'I' requires base verb form 'bring' (not 'brings'). Also 'key' should be plural 'keys' to match 'two or three'. Ensure verb agrees with subject and plural nouns follow numbers greater than one.

× Yes, last year I lost my keys in a park.

✓ Yes, last year I lost my keys in a park.

Sentence is correct; past tense 'lost' properly describes a past event. No change needed.

× That time I felt very disappointed.

✓ At that time I felt very disappointed.

Use the phrase 'at that time' to refer to a specific past moment; 'that time' is understandable but less natural. Tense 'felt' is correct for past feelings.

× I can't access my room and nothing and can't could not do anything.

✓ I couldn't access my room and couldn't do anything.

Original has redundant negatives and mixed tenses/modal forms ('can't', 'could not'). For past inability, use 'couldn't' consistently. Remove the unnecessary 'and nothing'.

× No, I do not often forget the case, but sometimes I forget and outside and if my out myself.

✓ No, I do not often forget them, but sometimes I forget and end up outside, locked out.

Original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Replace 'forget the case' with 'forget them' (keys). 'Forget and outside and if my out myself' is meaningless; 'end up outside, locked out' clearly expresses being left outside without keys.

× I think if the neighbor was crusted then we could share our keys with.

✓ I think if the neighbor could be trusted, then we could share our keys with them.

Use correct modal/conditional structure: 'if the neighbor could be trusted' or 'if the neighbor is trustworthy'. 'Crusted' is incorrect word; use 'trusted' or 'trustworthy'. Also include object pronoun 'them' after 'with' to complete the phrase.