Keys— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve clarity and grammar: start with a direct short answer, then give one clear reason. Correct grammar (e.g. "up-to-date technology called a Face ID keypad") and avoid repetition. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking phrase like "because".

例: No, I don't. My apartment uses an up-to-date Face ID keypad, so I don't need to carry keys.

提案: Be concise and coherent: answer directly, then give a specific, complete example. Use past tense correctly and avoid unfinished thoughts. Use a linking word like "once" or "when" to structure the sentence.

例: Yes, once when I was eight I lost the key to my elementary school locker, which made me feel really embarrassed because I had to ask my teacher for help.

提案: Work on grammar and fluency: use correct expressions (e.g. "I'm not very good at remembering things") and avoid sentence fragments. Give one clear supporting detail and a linking phrase like "so" or "therefore."

例: Yes, I often forget them because I'm not very good at remembering things, so I sometimes lock myself out and feel embarrassed.

提案: Organize your response: give a direct opinion, then two clear reasons using linking words like "because" and "for example." Correct collocations ("friendly with my neighbours") and avoid hesitations. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

例: No, I don't think it's a good idea because I don't know my neighbours well. For example, I live in an apartment in Seoul and we are not very friendly, so I wouldn't feel comfortable leaving my keys with them.

× Not really. That is because my house has a up to date to technique called Face ID keypad, so I don't have a key.

✓ Not really. That's because my house has an up-to-date technique called a Face ID keypad, so I don't have a key.

Errors: incorrect article usage and word order. Use the article 'an' or 'a' before nouns depending on pronunciation; here 'a Face ID keypad' is correct because 'Face' is pronounced with a consonant sound. 'Up-to-date' is a compound adjective and should be hyphenated before a noun. Also 'that is' can be contracted to 'that's' for natural speech. Suggestion: Say 'my house has an up-to-date technique called a Face ID keypad' or better 'my house uses an up-to-date Face ID keypad.' (Grammar problem type ID:22)

× Yes I have, when I was 8 I used to use a key at my elementary school cabinet so I felt really embarrassed but my second key ha.

✓ Yes I have. When I was 8, I used a key for my elementary school locker, so I felt really embarrassed, and I later found my second key.

Errors: tense and word choice. 'I have' (present perfect) is okay for answering, but the rest needs past simple to describe a past event: 'used to use' is acceptable but redundant with 'used to' and 'use'; 'elementary school cabinet' should be 'elementary school locker' or 'school locker.' 'Ha' is incomplete; likely meant 'had' or 'found.' Use commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: Use past simple consistently for past events: 'When I was 8, I used a key for my elementary school locker, so I felt really embarrassed, and I later found my second key.' (Grammar problem type ID:5)

× Absolutely. That is because I'm not pretty good at my memories so I often forgot my. Key. So I felt really embarrassed.

✓ Absolutely. That's because I'm not very good at remembering things, so I often forget my keys and feel really embarrassed.

Errors: incorrect adjective/adverb ('pretty good at my memories' is ungrammatical) and tense inconsistency. Use 'not very good at remembering things' to express inability; 'forget' should be present simple to match 'often'; 'my. Key.' is fragmented and should be 'my keys.' Also 'feel' should match present habitual. Suggestion: Use natural collocation: 'not very good at remembering things' and keep consistent present tense for habitual actions. (Grammar problem type ID:13)

× Not really. That is because I don't know. My neighbor, well that is because I live in Seoul at an apartment so we don't have a friendly with my neighbor so I don't to.

✓ Not really. That's because I don't know my neighbours well. I live in an apartment in Seoul, and we're not friendly with our neighbours, so I wouldn't do that.

Errors: incorrect pronouns and wording. 'My neighbor, well that is because' is fragmented. Use plural 'neighbours' for generality or keep singular but be consistent. 'Live in an apartment' is the correct preposition order. 'We don't have a friendly with my neighbor' is incorrect; use 'we're not friendly with our neighbours.' 'I don't to' is incomplete; intended 'I don't want to' or 'I wouldn't do that.' Suggestion: Use clear pronouns and complete modal structure: 'I wouldn't do that.' (Grammar problem type ID:12)