Keys— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: 'kids' thay vì 'keys', cấu trúc câu rối). Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sửa lỗi từ và ngữ pháp, dùng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể để giải thích thói quen của bạn. Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để mạch lạc (ví dụ: 'because', 'so').

例: I don't usually carry many keys with me because my parents normally keep my house key. For example, when I was a teenager they kept it for safety, so I only take a key when I need to go out alone.

提案: Câu trả lời dài dòng, có nhiều lỗi thì (tense) và cấu trúc, và thông tin lặp lại. Nên mở đầu bằng câu khẳng định ngắn, dùng thì quá khứ đơn cho sự kiện đã xảy ra, và tóm tắt chi tiết cụ thể (địa điểm, thời gian, kết quả). Hạn chế lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I lost my key about two years ago. I had been shopping at Vanguard Mall with a friend and when I returned home I realised my key was missing, so I had to call my parents to let me in.

提案: Câu trả lời ngắn và lẫn lộn thì; có lỗi ngữ pháp ('don't really lost') và lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì hiện tại đơn để nói thói quen, giải thích ngắn gọn với một ví dụ cụ thể, và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

例: No, I don't often lock myself out because my parents usually hold the house key. Since I tend to forget things, they prefer to keep it for me, which prevents me from being locked out.

提案: Ý tưởng ok nhưng diễn đạt lặp và không tự nhiên ('charge them' không đúng nghĩa). Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, nêu lý do cụ thể (tin tưởng, tiện lợi) và đưa ra điều kiện hoặc ví dụ (chỉ khi bạn tin tưởng hàng xóm). Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., 'trustworthy', 'reliable').

例: Yes, it can be a good idea to leave your key with a neighbour if they are trustworthy. For instance, a reliable neighbour can let you in when you're locked out, but I would only do this with someone I know well.

× Well, I would say I don't always bring kids with me because in Vietnam, out of Vietnamese, parents always keep the key of their daughter or their sons whenever they go outside.

✓ Well, I would say I don't always bring keys with me because in Vietnam, parents usually keep their daughters' or sons' keys when they go out.

The speaker used 'kids' instead of 'keys' and mixed singular/plural possessives. Use 'keys' (the object) and correct possessive forms: 'daughters' or sons' keys'. Also remove unclear phrase 'out of Vietnamese' and use 'parents usually' for natural expression.

× To be honest, the last time that I have lost my key was two years ago when I go to I.

✓ To be honest, the last time I lost my key was two years ago when I went to...

Present perfect 'have lost' is inconsistent with a specific past time 'two years ago'; use simple past 'lost'. Also 'go' should be past 'went'. The sentence fragment 'when I went to I' seems incomplete and should specify the place.

× I went to hang out with my friend in the Vanguard mall and my parents just go outside to date and when I come back home I just realized I lost my key.

✓ I went to hang out with my friend at Vanguard Mall, and my parents went out on a date; when I came back home, I realized I had lost my key.

Use parallel past tense: 'went' for actions that occurred in the past. Use 'at Vanguard Mall' for location. Sequence of past events should use past perfect 'had lost' or simple past 'lost' after 'when I came back'—past perfect clarifies the key was already lost before returning.

× MMM no I don't really lost my key when because most of the time my parents just keep it and I don't have the permission to keep my key because I I always forget the things that I bring with me.

✓ No, I don't really lose my key because most of the time my parents keep it, and I don't have permission to keep my key because I always forget the things I bring with me.

Present simple tense should be 'don't lose' not 'don't lost'. Remove redundant 'when'. 'Keep it' is fine. Remove duplicate 'I'. Use 'permission' without 'the' or with 'the' depending on context; here 'permission' is fine. Use concise phrasing.

× To be honest, I think it's a good idea to bring your key to your neighbor to keep them.

✓ To be honest, I think it's a good idea to give your key to your neighbor to keep it.

Subject 'your key' is singular, so pronoun must match: 'it' not 'them'. Use 'give' rather than 'bring to' for handing over. Maintain present simple 'think' and 'is'.

× Uh, because your neighbor is because you can charge them and go do whatever you want and they will always keep it.

✓ Because your neighbor is trustworthy, you can leave the key with them and go do whatever you want, and they will keep it safe.

Original sentence had 'charge them' which is incorrect; likely meant 'leave it with them' or 'trust them'. Fix preposition/verb choice: 'leave the key with them'. Also use 'trustworthy' for clarity and 'keep it safe' for natural expression.