Keys— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?
受験者
No, not really. I try to keep my key chain simple. I usually only carry the keys that I actually need it, like my house key so it's easier to manage.
試験官
Have you ever lost your keys?
受験者
No, I'm the kind of person who is really good at managing, good at managing. So before I leave some place I usually to check all of my stuff. So it's really unusual for me to lost anything.
試験官
Do you often forget the keys and lock yourself out?
受験者
Not every very often, but it has happened once or twice. After that I developed a habit of checking my keys before leaving home, which has helped a lot.
試験官
Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?
受験者
Yes, definitely. I think it can be a good idea as long as you trust your neighbor. It can be very helpful in emergencies, especially if you accidentally lock yourself out. But.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?
スコア: 78.0提案: Be more concise and correct small grammar mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, fix pronoun and article errors, and add one brief specific detail using a linking word.
例: No, I don’t. I keep my keychain simple and only carry essentials, such as my house key and a bike lock key, so it’s easier to manage.
Have you ever lost your keys?
スコア: 65.0提案: Avoid repetition and correct grammar (verb forms and infinitive use). Give one concrete example of a habit and use linking words to connect ideas.
例: No, I haven’t. I’m quite organized, so before I leave a place I always check my bag and pockets; for example, I have a checklist on my phone that reminds me to take my keys.
Do you often forget the keys and lock yourself out?
スコア: 80.0提案: Correct small errors and tighten phrasing. Use precise frequency language and link cause and effect clearly.
例: Not very often — only once or twice. After the first time I developed a habit of checking my keys before leaving home, so I haven’t been locked out since.
Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?
スコア: 72.0提案: Finish your thought and avoid trailing off. Provide a clear condition and one specific example or caveat, using linking words to show contrast.
例: Yes, I do, as long as you trust the neighbour; for example, I would leave a spare key with a close neighbour for emergencies, but I wouldn’t if I didn’t know them well.
文法
× I usually only carry the keys that I actually need it, like my house key so it's easier to manage.
✓ I usually only carry the keys that I actually need, like my house key, so it's easier to manage.
The clause 'that I actually need it' contains an unnecessary pronoun 'it'. Remove 'it' so the relative clause correctly modifies 'keys'. Also add a comma before 'so' to separate the clauses for clarity.
× So before I leave some place I usually to check all of my stuff.
✓ So before I leave a place I usually check all of my stuff.
The phrase 'usually to check' incorrectly inserts the infinitive 'to'. Use the base verb 'check' after the adverb 'usually'. Also 'some place' is nonstandard; use 'a place' or 'somewhere'.
× So it's really unusual for me to lost anything.
✓ So it's really unusual for me to lose anything.
After 'to' the verb must be in base form (infinitive), not past tense. Use 'to lose' instead of 'to lost'. This fixes the infinitive form error.
× Not every very often, but it has happened once or twice.
✓ Not very often, but it has happened once or twice.
The phrase 'every very often' is incorrect; the adverb 'very' should modify 'often' as 'very often'. Remove 'every' to produce a natural adverbial phrase.
× But.
✓ But I would prefer to leave keys with a trusted neighbor only in an emergency.
A single conjunction 'But.' is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause. Provide a complete clause to express the intended contrast; the suggested correction completes the thought and fits the context of conditional trust.
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