Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Nên sửa ngữ pháp, phát âm từ vựng và làm câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Sử dụng đúng danh từ số nhiều/ít (salad không phải salas) và bỏ từ thừa; (2) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết; (3) Dùng liên từ hợp lý và từ vựng chính xác như “healthy”, “energising”, “quick to prepare”.

例: My favourite food is salad. I often eat it in the morning because it’s healthy and energising, and it’s quick to prepare when I’m busy.

提案: Cần làm rõ bạn muốn nói món gì (hiện tại có nhầm từ ‘fur’ và ‘infra’). Sửa thì và ngữ pháp (used to/liked), nêu lí do cụ thể và đưa ví dụ về thành phần. Tránh ngập ngừng và sửa lỗi chia động từ. Viết 2–3 câu rõ ràng: chủ đề + lí do + ví dụ.

例: When I was young I used to eat beef stew because it tasted delicious and was very filling. It had many ingredients like carrots, potatoes and beef, which my family cooked often.

提案: Cần rõ ràng hơn về thói quen theo mùa và dùng từ chính xác (không dùng ‘far’). Dùng cấu trúc hoàn chỉnh với linking words (for example, because) và nêu ví dụ cụ thể về món ăn mùa đông. Sửa thì và ngữ pháp (it makes me).

例: In winter I usually eat hot soups, for example chicken noodle soup, because warm food helps me feel comfortable and relaxed during cold days.

× My favorite food is Salas because salads give me a lot of energy in the morning and it is a healthy foods so I really like this.

✓ My favorite food is salad because salads give me a lot of energy in the morning and it is a healthy food so I really like it.

Use singular uncountable noun 'salad' for the general concept (article error). Change 'foods' (plural) to 'food' because 'healthy' describes a type as a singular/uncountable noun. Replace 'this' with 'it' to refer back to 'salad'. Suggestion: Use 'salad' when speaking about the dish in general and ensure pronouns agree with the noun.

× When I was young I often eat fur because it very delicious and it's give me a lot of vitamin uh.

✓ When I was young I often ate pho because it was very delicious and it gave me a lot of vitamins.

Tense mismatch: the time phrase 'When I was young' requires past tense verbs. Change 'eat' to 'ate', 'is' to 'was', and 'give' to 'gave'. Also correct noun forms: 'vitamin' -> 'vitamins'. Suggestion: Use past simple for habitual actions in the past and plural for countable items like vitamins.

× Infra have a lot of ingredients such as beef salads and.

✓ It (pho) has a lot of ingredients such as beef and noodles.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'Infra' is unclear; replace with proper noun 'pho' or 'it' and use singular verb 'has'. Also fix the list of ingredients: 'beef salads' is incorrect; likely 'beef and noodles'. Suggestion: Use the correct noun and ensure subject-verb agreement and clear list items.

× Just in the winter I often eat far because it's very warm and delicious.

✓ In the winter I often eat pho because it's very warm and delicious.

Word choice and tense: 'Just in the winter' is acceptable but 'In the winter' is more natural. 'eat far' seems to be a misheard word; replace with 'eat pho'. Tense 'often eat' is present simple and fits habitual action in general statements about seasons. Suggestion: Use correct food name and natural seasonal phrasing.

× It's make me feel good and relax.

✓ It makes me feel good and relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It' requires third person singular 'makes' (Grammar problem type 2/27). Also 'relax' should be an adjective 'relaxed' to describe the resulting state. Suggestion: Use 'makes' for third person singular and change verb to adjective when describing a state.