Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сократите и упростите ответ, начните с ясного тематического предложения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные детали. Исправьте ошибки в грамматике и названиях (например, «borscht» вместо «colored Boris»), используйте связку для логичности (например, «for example» или «because»). Максимум 3-4 предложения.

例: My favourite food is borscht, a traditional beet soup. I especially like it because it is rich in flavour and reminds me of family meals. For example, my mother makes it with beef and lots of vegetables, which makes it hearty and comforting.

提案: Начинайте с прямого ответа и дайте конкретный пример. Используйте правильные времена (past simple) и исправьте слова (например, «allowed» → «liked», «lavash» — объяснить что это). Добавьте связку для плавности (например, «for example» или «also»). Не повторяйте одинаковые выражения.

例: When I was young, I liked many kinds of food, but I especially enjoyed lavash. Lavash is a thin flatbread often filled with meat and vegetables, and I liked it because it was tasty and easy to eat. For example, my family often bought lavash as a quick snack after school.

提案: Дайте более развёрнутый, но короткий ответ: начните с «Yes» или «No», затем объясните причину и приведите 1 пример. Избегайте заполнителей («uh») и повторов; используйте связки (because, so). Максимум 2–3 предложения.

例: No, I don't usually eat different foods at different times of the year because my mother cooks the same dishes all year. For example, we often eat soups and meat dishes whether it is summer or winter, so my diet stays quite consistent.

× I have a lot of type of food which very delicious for me and good looking for me.

✓ I have a lot of types of food that are very delicious and look good to me.

The noun 'type' should be plural 'types' after 'a lot of'. Use 'that are' to link to plural 'types'. 'Very delicious for me' is unnatural; use 'very delicious' or 'delicious to me'. 'Good looking for me' should be 'look good to me'. Suggestion: change 'a lot of type' to 'a lot of types', use 'that are' and 'look good to me'.

× For example it may be fast food or other food for example soup.

✓ For example, it may be fast food or other foods, for example, soup.

The sentence repeats 'for example' and lacks commas. Use plural 'foods' after 'other'. Insert commas around 'for example'. Suggestion: avoid repeating 'for example' twice and use commas for clarity.

× But my favorite is soup colored Boris.

✓ But my favorite is a soup called Boris.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'soup' and the correct structure 'called' to name the soup. 'Colored' is incorrect in this context. Suggestion: say 'a soup called Boris' to name the dish.

× It's very delicious for me and I just enjoy with it.

✓ It's very delicious to me and I just enjoy it.

Use 'delicious to me' not 'for me' in this context, and do not use the preposition 'with' after 'enjoy' in English; 'enjoy it' is correct. Suggestion: replace 'for me' with 'to me' and remove 'with' after 'enjoy'.

× I allowed a lot of types of food, for example it was fast food and exactly lavash.

✓ I liked a lot of types of food; for example, there was fast food and especially lavash.

Use past tense 'liked' rather than 'allowed'. 'Exactly' is incorrect here; use 'especially'. Also 'there was' helps introduce examples of food that existed/appeared. Suggestion: use 'liked' and 'especially'.

× Lavash is is very delicious fast food and it was very interesting for me and instead of other foods.

✓ Lavash is a very delicious fast food, and it was very interesting to me compared to other foods.

Remove duplicate 'is is'. Use the article 'a' before 'very delicious fast food'. Use 'interesting to me' not 'for me', and 'compared to other foods' is clearer than 'instead of'. Suggestion: fix duplication, add 'a', and use 'compared to' for comparisons.

× No, because my mom cooked same uh foods at home and I just eat foods which cooked by mom uh and fast food and other delicious food.

✓ No, because my mom cooks the same foods at home, and I just eat the foods she cooks, as well as fast food and other delicious dishes.

Use present tense 'cooks' to describe habitual action. Add definite article 'the' before 'same foods' and 'foods she cooks'. Use 'dishes' for variety and clearer wording. Avoid filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use present simple for habits, include 'the', and use 'she cooks' as a relative clause.