Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较直接但不够自然与简洁。开头的“OK”可省略；应先用一句主题句直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明原因或举例，注意时态和语法（如省份前用“from Hunan”而非强调多余信息）。总体保持在最多5句内并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: My favourite food is spicy dishes from Hunan. I grew up eating hot, flavorful meals, so I particularly enjoy dishes with chili and garlic. For example, Hunan-style braised pork is one of my favourites because it is both rich and spicy.

提案: 回答内容相关且有例子，但时态混用（问题是过去时，应使用过去式或明确表明习惯）。可以先用一句过去时的主题句，然后用现在对比或补充说明，用连接词（e.g., and, also, when）提高衔接性，并略为具体说明喜欢的原因。保持不超过5句。

例: When I was young, I loved eating spicy food from Hunan. Growing up, my family often cooked hot, flavourful dishes, so I became fond of spicy chicken and mapo tofu. I still enjoy these dishes today because they are comforting and full of flavour.

提案: 回答包含季节对比，但存在语法错误和时态不一致（如“has”应为“have”，“when it was winter”可改为“in winter”）。建议先用一句总括性的主题句，然后用两三个简短句子分别说明冬季和夏季的饮食，使用连接词（e.g., in winter, whereas in summer）并尽量提供具体原因。控制句子数量与长度。

例: Yes, I usually eat different foods depending on the season. In winter, I prefer hot dishes like hot pot because they keep me warm. In summer, I choose cold treats such as ice cream, cold milk tea, or chilled fruits to cool down.

× OK because I am from Hunan province so I enjoy hot food most.

✓ OK, because I am from Hunan province, I enjoy hot food the most.

该句时态为一般现在时表达习惯或偏好，但原句缺少必要的冠词/词序和逗号使其显得不自然。建议在句首加逗号，使用“the most”表示“最喜欢”的程度；此外将“so”可保留或改为逗号连接更自然。

× What kind of food did you like when you were young?

✓ (No correction needed)

此句为考官问题，使用一般过去时询问过去喜好，语法正确，无需修改。

× I enjoy spicy food the best because I am from Hunan province and I also like the food in Sichuan such as spicy chicken, mapo, tofu and hot pot.

✓ I enjoy spicy food the most because I am from Hunan province, and I also like Sichuan food, such as spicy chicken, mapo tofu, and hot pot.

句子表达现在的喜好，使用一般现在时正确。需要改进的是程度副词用法：应使用“the most”而不是“the best”；并调整并列结构和标点，使句子更清晰；“mapo, tofu” 应合并为“mapo tofu”表示一道菜。 建议：把“the best”改为“the most”，用逗号分隔并列成分，并将菜名写成常见搭配。

× Yes, of course, different seasons has different tastes.

✓ Yes, of course, different seasons have different tastes.

主谓不一致错误。主语“different seasons”为复数，而谓语动词应使用复数形式“have”，原句使用单数动词“has”错误。建议：确保动词与主语在人称和数上一致。

× When it was winter, I like to eat hot pot to make me warm, and when it was summer we like something cold such as ice cream, milk, tea.

✓ In winter, I like to eat hot pot to keep me warm, and in summer we like cold things such as ice cream, milk, and tea.

句中时态和习惯表达需要统一为一般现在时以表示季节性习惯。原句用“When it was winter”带过去时不合适，应改为“In winter”或“When it is winter/when winter comes”。同时“to make me warm”不自然，建议用“to keep me warm”。“something cold”应改为“cold things”，并用并列逗号分隔。建议：使用一般现在时描述经常发生的事情，使用更自然的搭配（keep ... warm, cold things）。