Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but a bit generic and slightly wordy. Use a concise topic sentence, avoid unnecessary repetition (e.g., "traditional Japanese dish" and listing obvious components), and add a brief personal reason or a specific detail to make it more engaging. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use linking words if you expand.

例: I love sushi, especially salmon nigiri, because the rice is lightly seasoned and the fish is very fresh. For example, I often go to a local sushi bar where the chef prepares each piece to order, which makes it taste exceptional.

提案: Good use of specific personal detail and reason. Improve by correcting small grammar (use singular/plural and tense consistency), polishing phrasing, and adding a linking word to enhance flow. Keep it concise and natural.

例: When I was young, I loved fried chicken and ate it about twice a week because it was crispy and flavorful. Also, my parents often bought it as a special treat, so it feels nostalgic.

提案: Answer addresses the question but has conversational fillers, minor grammar mistakes and vague details (e.g., "Ted holiday"). Remove filler words, correct grammar (singular/plural, articles), and give one or two concrete examples of seasonal dishes with a linking word to connect ideas.

例: Yes. On normal days I eat regular home-cooked meals my mother makes, but during holidays, such as Christmas, we prepare special dishes like roast turkey and seasonal desserts. For example, at Lunar New Year we also enjoy dumplings and sweet rice cakes.

× It's a traditional Japanese dish that consists of rice, various type of seafood and of course salad as well.

✓ It's a traditional Japanese dish that consists of rice, various types of seafood, and of course salad as well.

The phrase 'various type of seafood' is incorrect because 'various' requires a plural noun: 'various types of seafood' or 'various kinds of seafood'. Also add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity. Suggestion: use 'various types of seafood' when referring to multiple kinds of seafood.

× When I was young, I loved fried chickens so much that I would eat it about twice a week.

✓ When I was young, I loved fried chicken so much that I would eat it about twice a week.

The noun 'fried chicken' is an uncountable/collective food noun in this context, so using the plural 'fried chickens' is wrong. Also 'it' correctly refers back to 'fried chicken'. Suggestion: treat names of food as uncountable unless counting individual pieces: 'fried chicken' not 'fried chickens'.

× I like it because it tastes crispy and my family often bought it as a treat.

✓ I liked it because it tasted crispy and my family often bought it as a treat.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I like' and 'it tastes' with past action 'my family often bought'. The question asks about when the student was young, so all verbs should be in the past. Change to past tense: 'I liked it because it tasted crispy, and my family often bought it as a treat.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent in past narratives.

× Yes, on normal day I usually eat regular home cooked meals that my mom cooks for me.

✓ Yes, on a normal day I usually eat regular home-cooked meals that my mom cooks for me.

Missing article 'a' before 'normal day' and 'home-cooked' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before the noun. Also maintain 'regular home-cooked meals' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: include 'a' and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× But on special occasions, uh or holidays such as Christmas and Ted holiday, I often eat different kind of dishes.

✓ But on special occasions or holidays such as Christmas and Tet holiday, I often eat different kinds of dishes.

'Different kind of dishes' is incorrect; after 'different' use plural 'kinds' when followed by 'of' and a plural noun: 'different kinds of dishes'. Also 'Ted' appears to be a misspelling of 'Tet' (Vietnamese Lunar New Year) — corrected to 'Tet'. Suggestion: use 'different kinds of dishes' and ensure proper noun spelling: 'Tet'.