Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır, ancak daha doğal ve ayrıntılı olmalı. Konu cümlesinden sonra sarma ve zeytinyağını neden sevdiğinizi açıklayın, bağlaçlar kullanın ve maksimum 5 cümleyi geçmeyin. Ayrıca 'olive oil with sarma' ifadesi kulağa biraz garip gelebilir; 'sarma served with olive oil' veya 'dolma/sarma dressed with olive oil' gibi daha doğal bir ifade kullanın.

例: My favourite food is sarma, especially when it’s dressed with good-quality olive oil. I like it because the combination of tangy rice and herbs with the rich olive oil creates a balanced flavour. Also, my family often makes it for special occasions, so it has sentimental value.

提案: Cümle zamanı uyumuna dikkat edin (geçmiş için 'liked' kullanın). Cevabınızı doğrudan konu cümlesiyle başlatın, ardından örnek verin ve neden sevdiğinizi açıklayın. Bağlaçlar (because, so) veya sıralayıcı ifadeler kullanarak daha akıcı yapın. Ayrıca gereksiz tekrarları ve genel ifadeleri azaltın.

例: When I was young, I liked fast food, especially hamburgers and pizza. I enjoyed them because they were tasty and convenient, and my friends often ate the same things at school. Over time I started to prefer healthier options, but I still enjoy fast food occasionally.

提案: Cümle açık değil ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Öncelikle net bir konu cümlesi kurun ('Yes, I eat different foods...'), sonra mevsimlere göre hangi yiyecekleri yediğinizi açıkça ve spesifik olarak belirtin. 'It's engines' gibi anlamsız ifadelerden kaçının. Bağlaçlarla (for example, in summer, while in winter) mantıklı bir yapı oluşturun.

例: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer light dishes like salads and grilled vegetables, while in winter I eat heartier foods such as soups and roasted broccoli to stay warm.

提案: Cevap doğrudan ama çok kısa; genişletin. Önce net bir konu cümlesi kurun, sonra neden değişmediğini veya nadiren değiştiğini birkaç nedenle açıklayın. Basit bağlaçlar kullanarak mantıklı bir açıklama verin.

例: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed since I was a child. I still love sarma because of its taste and the family memories associated with it, so I continue to choose it at celebrations and family meals.

× When I was young, I like food. Fast food, one example, hamburger or pizza.

✓ When I was young, I liked food. For example, fast food like hamburgers or pizza.

The student used present tense 'like' in a sentence that refers to the past ('When I was young'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'liked'. Also sentence fragments and article/number issues were fixed: 'For example' connects ideas and 'hamburgers' is plural to match 'like'. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time frame, combine fragments into a single clear sentence and use plural for general examples. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, that example. In summer I it's engines and in winter I eat broccoli.

✓ Yes. For example, in summer I eat eggplants and in winter I eat broccoli.

Original contained fragments and an incorrect word 'engines' likely intended as 'eggplants' and the phrase 'I it's' is ungrammatical. Correct structure uses 'For example' then parallel clauses 'in summer I eat ... and in winter I eat ...'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments, use parallel structure for contrasting seasons, and choose correct vocabulary. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× No, it's not changed.

✓ No, it has not changed.

The student used 'it's not changed' which mixes contraction 'it's' (it is/it has) with a past participle; the correct form for change over time is present perfect 'it has not changed' (or 'it hasn't changed'). Suggestion: use 'has/have' + past participle for actions or states that started in the past and continue to present. Grammar problem type ID: 9