Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatical, concise and directly state your favourite food first, then give one or two specific reasons with connecting words. Avoid unclear words (e.g. “Vatican food”) and incorrect product names unless intended.

例: My favourite food is seafood. I especially enjoy lobster and fresh prawns because I grew up near the coast, so they taste fresher to me. Also, seafood is versatile — I like it grilled or in soups, which keeps meals interesting.

提案: Answer directly with a clear past tense sentence, give specific childhood details and use linking words (because, so, and). Correct grammar (I enjoyed, I grew up). Avoid repetition and unclear words (e.g. “cruel seafood”).

例: When I was young, I enjoyed many kinds of food, especially seafood and vegetables. Because I grew up near the coast, I often ate fresh lobster and shrimp, so seafood became my favourite early on.

提案: Give a clear, logical answer using linking words and correct tense. State whether you do change foods seasonally, explain why with a specific reason (availability, tradition, health), and avoid vague claims about getting sick without explanation.

例: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I eat more seafood and salads because seafood is fresher and lighter, while in winter I prefer hearty soups and stews to stay warm.

提案: Respond simply and directly using present perfect or simple present to show continuity (e.g. "It hasn't changed"). Give a brief reason and one specific example. Fix grammar and unclear phrases (e.g. “scream lobster craft”).

例: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since I was a child because I still love seafood. For example, I still enjoy eating fresh lobster and grilled prawns whenever I can.

× In daily life have a many type of food like seafood, vegetable or Vatican food.

✓ In daily life I have many types of food like seafood, vegetables, or vegetarian food.

The sentence misses a subject 'I' and uses incorrect singular/plural forms: 'a many type' is incorrect. Use 'many' with plural noun 'types'. 'Vegetable' should be plural when talking about kinds of food. 'Vatican food' seems to be a lexical error; likely 'vegetarian food' fits. Suggestion: include the subject, use 'many types', and plural nouns for general references.

× But the best of mine is seafood.

✓ But my favorite is seafood.

The phrase 'the best of mine' is an unnatural pronoun construction. Use possessive adjective 'my' with 'favorite' to express preference. This corrects pronoun usage and improves idiomatic phrasing.

× I love seafood because I like to eat Kraft lobster.

✓ I love seafood because I like to eat fresh lobster.

'Kraft lobster' is likely a word choice error; 'fresh lobster' fits context. Present tense 'I love' and 'I like' are fine. Replace incorrect noun with appropriate adjective+noun. Also ensure consistency in vocabulary.

× When I'm worried young I'm enjoy many kinds of food.

✓ When I was young I enjoyed many kinds of food.

Tense is incorrect: asking about the past requires past tense. 'When I'm worried young' is incorrect phrasing; use 'When I was young'. 'I'm enjoy' mixes present continuous with base verb—use past 'enjoyed'. Suggestion: use simple past for past states or habits.

× She just vegetables, seafood, but the best of my seafood.

✓ I just ate vegetables and seafood, but my favorite was seafood.

Pronoun 'She' is incorrect; the speaker refers to themselves, so use 'I'. The sentence lacks verbs: add 'ate' for past habit. 'The best of my seafood' is ungrammatical—use 'my favorite was seafood'. Ensure pronoun consistency and include appropriate verbs.

× I love seafood because I grow up near the coast and I especially enjoy fresh lobster and cruel seafood, so I love it too much.

✓ I love seafood because I grew up near the coast and I especially enjoy fresh lobster and other seafood, so I love it very much.

Use past tense 'grew up' for a completed past action. 'Cruel seafood' is incorrect word choice; likely 'other seafood' is intended. 'Love it too much' is informal and can be 'love it very much'. Ensure past events use past tense and correct vocabulary.

× Yes, I ate different food at different times of the year because, uh, in the summer I can eat seafood, but in the winter I cannot eat it because if you eat seafood in the winter, you will have a stomach. Umm, the weather is cold and.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because, in the summer I can eat seafood, but in the winter I cannot because if you eat seafood in the winter you may get a stomachache since the weather is cold.

The response mixes past and present. Use simple present 'I eat' to describe habitual actions. 'Different food' should be plural 'different foods'. 'You will have a stomach' is ungrammatical—use 'you may get a stomachache'. Remove trailing fragment and filler words. Maintain consistent tense for habits.

× No, I'm not saying my favorite food chances since I was a child because I love seafood too much so I can eat seafood all around my life and I love to eat scream lobster craft.

✓ No, my favorite food has not changed since I was a child because I love seafood so much; I have eaten seafood throughout my life and I love to eat steamed lobster.

Use present perfect 'has not changed' to connect past to present. 'I'm not saying' is awkward—use direct statement. 'Chances' is incorrect word; use 'changed'. 'Can eat seafood all around my life' should be 'have eaten seafood throughout my life'. 'Scream lobster craft' appears to be wrong words; likely 'steamed lobster'. Ensure correct verb forms and vocabulary, and use appropriate tenses for change over time.

× I love seafood because I like to eat Kraft lobster.

✓ I love seafood because I like to eat a lobster dish such as steamed lobster.

If referring to a specific type of lobster dish, include article or classifier 'a lobster' or 'a lobster dish'. 'Kraft' may be a brand name or error; clarify with correct article and noun. Use articles when referring to countable singular nouns.