Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence naming the food, avoid repetition and awkward phrasing, and add one brief supporting detail about why or how you prepare it. Limit to up to 5 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

例: My favourite food is roast chicken. I usually bake it in the oven rather than frying it because baking makes it healthier and keeps the meat juicy. I also season it with herbs and lemon, which gives it a fresh flavour.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear or contradictory expressions (e.g. 'encouraging me to these to eat' and 'preventing me'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons for the change, and keep sentences natural and grammatical.

例: When I was a child I loved eating snacks and sweets. Because my friends and family often offered them, I ate them regularly, although I knew they were not very healthy. As I grew older, I changed my habits and started choosing healthier options.

提案: Answer directly about your own habits rather than general statements, and avoid repeating words like 'for example'. Use one clear example and a linking phrase ('for instance', 'however') and be concise. Keep it to 2–3 sentences maximum.

例: Yes, I do. For instance, at Christmas my family usually eats roast turkey and special desserts, while at other times we prefer everyday meals like soup, rice and vegetables.

提案: Start with a direct statement about whether your favourite food changed, then give a clear reason and a specific example of what you eat now. Avoid filler phrases and correct tense/grammar (e.g. 'I became more into sports' not 'I become'). Keep it natural and concise.

例: Yes, it has changed. As a child I preferred sweets and snacks, but after taking up sports I began eating healthier meals like grilled chicken, salads and whole grains, although I still enjoy snacks occasionally.

× My favorite food is Chicken Bunny, but I don't always fry fry it.

✓ My favorite food is Chicken Bunny, but I don't always fry it.

The sentence repeats the verb 'fry' twice, which is redundant and ungrammatical; this is categorized as an article/errors type because the output must match list—however the core issue is repetition. Remove the duplicated word to make the sentence concise and grammatically correct. Also ensure proper capitalization for dish names remains consistent.

× I choose to bake it instead inside the oven.

✓ I choose to bake it in the oven instead.

The phrase 'inside the oven' is acceptable but 'in the oven' is more natural. The adverb 'instead' typically follows the verb phrase. Reorder to 'bake it in the oven instead' for natural word order and flow.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young?

✓ (No correction needed)

The question as written is grammatically correct and uses appropriate past tense 'did you like' for asking about past preferences; no change required.

× When I was younger I merely loved eating snacks like chops and sweets.

✓ When I was younger, I mainly loved eating snacks like chops and sweets.

'Merely' is not wrong but sounds awkward; 'mainly' or 'mostly' is more natural to express frequency/habit. Add a comma after the introductory clause for correct punctuation and natural cadence.

× My friends also encouraged me to these to eat this type of food.

✓ My friends also encouraged me to eat this type of food.

The phrase contains extra words 'to these' that are incorrect and ungrammatical. Remove the unnecessary words and keep the infinitive 'to eat' after 'encouraged me'.

× I know it was but not the healthiest thing, but all my surroundings were encouraging me to do so and then actually preventing me.

✓ I knew it was not the healthiest thing, but everyone around me encouraged me to do so and did not prevent me.

Tense inconsistency: the speaker is describing past habits, so 'know' should be 'knew.' 'All my surroundings' is an incorrect collocation—use 'everyone around me.' The latter part 'encouraging me to do so and then actually preventing me' contradicts itself; likely the intended meaning is that people encouraged the behavior and did not prevent it, so rewrite accordingly.

× But as I grew older I changed my eating habits a lot.

✓ (No correction needed)

This sentence correctly uses past tense 'grew' and 'changed' to describe past actions; no grammatical correction required.

× People usually eat different foods depending on the time of the year.

✓ (No correction needed)

This general statement correctly uses the present simple tense to describe habitual actions; no correction needed.

× For example, around holidays or Christmas time for example, people prefer to eat Turkey and Christmas sweets.

✓ For example, around the holidays or at Christmastime people prefer to eat turkey and Christmas sweets.

Avoid repeating 'for example' twice. Use 'the holidays' and 'Christmastime' as the natural expressions. Use lowercase 'turkey' unless it is a proper name. Use the preposition 'at' with 'Christmastime' and remove extra commas for smoother flow.

× But in other times of the year or ordinary times, people just stick with normal food eating.

✓ But at other times of the year, people stick to ordinary food.

'Other times of the year or ordinary times' is redundant; simplify to 'at other times of the year.' The phrase 'stick with normal food eating' is unidiomatic—use 'stick to ordinary food' or 'eat normal food' instead.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ (No correction needed)

The question correctly uses present perfect 'Has ... changed since you were a child?' to ask about change over time; no correction needed.

× Yes definitely. As I have said my favorite food when I was a child was always snacks and sweets.

✓ Yes, definitely. As I said, my favorite foods when I was a child were always snacks and sweets.

Tense: 'As I have said' is less natural here than 'As I said' when referring to earlier in the same conversation. Number agreement: 'favorite food ... was always snacks' is inconsistent—use plural 'favorite foods' and plural verb 'were' to match 'snacks and sweets.' Add commas after interjections and introductory phrases.

× But as I grew older and I become more into sports I tended to or prefer to eat healthy food.

✓ But as I grew older and became more into sports, I tended to prefer healthy food.

'Become' should be past tense 'became' to match 'grew older.' Choose one construction: 'tended to prefer' is correct to show habitual past inclination. Remove 'or' which creates confusion. Add a comma after the introductory clause.

× I still eat snacks but I stick with healthy food like most of the time.

✓ I still eat snacks, but most of the time I stick to healthy food.

Word order and preposition: 'stick with healthy food like most of the time' is awkward. Place 'most of the time' before the verb phrase and use 'stick to' rather than 'stick with' for habitual adherence to a diet. Add a comma before 'but' for clarity.