Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You should answer directly with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give 1–2 specific reasons using coherent linking words. Avoid unclear or invented words and reduce redundancy. Focus on simple, correct vocabulary (e.g., “spicy,” “variety,” “flavour”) and keep to 2–4 sentences.

例: My favourite food is Chinese cuisine. I enjoy it because it offers a wide variety of flavours and many spicy dishes. Also, Chinese food is easy to share with friends, so I often eat it at gatherings.

提案: Begin with a clear topic sentence about childhood preferences, then add specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like “also” or “however.” Correct word choice (e.g., “because of the taste and spiciness” not “cold”) and grammar (past tense) will improve clarity.

例: When I was young, I liked many kinds of food, but Chinese food was my favourite because of its strong flavours and spiciness. I also enjoyed continental dishes sometimes, especially because they seemed healthier.

提案: Answer directly with a simple statement about seasonal eating, then give 1–2 clear, specific examples using linking words like “for example” or “in summer.” Avoid gibberish and use correct food names. Keep sentences short and grammatical.

例: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer cold noodle salads and fruits, while in winter I like hot soups and stews to keep warm.

提案: State clearly whether your favourite food has changed, then explain specific differences and reasons (e.g., health, taste). Use correct vocabulary (“preferences,” “less oily,” “healthier”) and clear linking words like “because” or “so.” Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

例: My favourite foods have changed since childhood. I still like snacks, but now I prefer healthier options and eat less oily food because I am more concerned about my health.

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✓ I like many kinds of food, including Chinese and continental, but my favourite is Chinese food because it is widely available, flavorful, and spicy.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors, incoherent phrases and incorrect word choices that prevent understanding. Suggestions: break the idea into a clear main clause and supporting details, use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'widely available' instead of 'basic rampage available in my user'), and choose consistent nouns ('favourite', 'Chinese food', 'continental'). Maintain parallel structure when listing reasons: 'widely available, flavorful, and spicy.'

× That's when I was young. I love different type of food but my favorite one is Chinese food because I love Chinese food because of cold, taste and spiciness. Apart from this, I love continental food crises healthy for sometimes.

✓ When I was young, I liked many types of food, but my favourite was Chinese food because of its flavour and spiciness. I also sometimes liked continental food because it seemed healthy.

The original mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. The question asks about past preference, so use past tense verbs ('liked', 'was'). Correct noun forms ('types') and adjective use ('flavour' and 'spiciness'). Replace unclear words ('cold' and 'crises') with intended meanings; use 'seemed healthy' to express occasional preference. Keep tense consistent throughout the sentence.

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✓ I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, I eat cold dishes such as cold noodles in summer and warm soups in winter. Last year I also tried many Italian and valley dishes; I enjoyed the refreshing cold dishes.

The original is largely unintelligible with many wrong words and phrases. Rewrite to match the question: start with a direct statement 'I eat different foods at different times of the year.' Give clear examples and use correct vocabulary ('cold noodles', 'warm soups', 'Italian dishes'). Ensure logical sequence and avoid repeated or incorrect words. Use simple, coherent sentences.

× I also love snack to me from childhood, but my faces have changed. Nowadays I plan for friends and less oily and less dry food because I care more about health and prayer.

✓ I also loved snacks when I was a child, but my tastes have changed. Nowadays I prefer fresher food that is less oily and less dry because I care more about my health.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect words ('faces' for 'tastes', 'plan for friends' unclear, 'prayer' irrelevant). Use past tense for childhood ('loved') and present tense for current preferences ('prefer'). Correct vocabulary and collocations: 'tastes have changed', 'prefer fresher food', and 'care about my health.' Remove unrelated words and keep sentences concise and relevant to the question.