Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı; gereksiz tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları azaltılmalı. Konuyu doğrudan belirtip ardından bir veya iki destekleyici cümle kur; bağlaçlar (for example, also) kullan ve kelime seçiminde doğruluğa dikkat et. Örneğin 'most popular cuisine' yerine 'a popular dish' ve 'I find fascinating try to new cuisine' yerine 'I enjoy trying new cuisines' gibi daha doğal ifadeler kullan.

例: My favourite food is kebab because it’s a popular and flavorful dish in Turkey. I also enjoy trying new cuisines; for example, I like Asian food such as sushi, especially when it’s fresh.

提案: Cümleler net değil ve kelime seçimi yanlış; ifadeler anlam kaybettiriyor. Daha açık, kısa ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru cümleler kur. Geçmiş zamanı tutarlı kullan ve nedenleri açıklarken basit bağlaçlar (because, so) kullan. Örneğin 'fast food' ve 'refused' gibi doğru kelimeleri kullan.

例: When I was young, I often ate fast food, which affected my health. I refused to eat healthy meals my mother prepared because I preferred fried snacks, and that sometimes made me feel tired.

提案: Cevap yarım kalmış ve tekrarlar var; sezonlara göre yemek alışkanlıklarından bahsetmelisin. Eğer farklı zamanlarda farklı yemekler yiyorsan bunu örneklerle açıkla (festivals, seasons, travel). Bağlaç ve zaman uyumuna dikkat et, cümleyi tamamla.

例: Yes, I often try different foods at different times of the year. For example, I eat lighter salads and cold dishes in summer, but prefer hearty stews and soups in winter. I also try local specialties when I travel to new cities.

提案: Cevap tekrarlı, kelime hataları ve uygunsuz ifadeler içeriyor. Net bir karşılaştırma yap: geçmiş alışkanlıklarını ve şimdiye dek olan değişikliği açıkla. Kısa, mantıklı nedenler ver ve tekrarları kaldır.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I ate a lot of fast food and often refused salads and vegetables, but now I enjoy healthy meals and eat more vegetables because I feel better and healthier.

× It's most popular cuisine in Turkey.

✓ It's the most popular cuisine in Turkey.

The definite article 'the' is required before a superlative or when referring to a specific, known item. Use 'the most popular' to indicate kebab's status among Turkish cuisines.

× Also I find fascinating try to new cuisine like Asian cuisine, Chinese cuisine, especially sushi and raw fish.

✓ Also I find it fascinating to try new cuisines like Asian and Chinese cuisine, especially sushi and raw fish.

After the adjective 'fascinating' the structure is 'find it + adjective + to-infinitive'. Use 'to try' not bare verb; 'new cuisine' should be plural 'new cuisines' or 'new cuisine types'; include 'it' as a dummy object for 'find'.

× When I was young, I ate face food.

✓ When I was young, I ate fast food.

This is likely a word choice error: 'face food' is incorrect — the intended phrase is 'fast food'. No article is needed here; 'fast food' is uncountable.

× Uh, that's uh. Affect my health badly.

✓ Uh, that affected my health badly.

The original fragments are incomplete and have wrong tense. Use a complete past-tense clause 'that affected my health badly' to match 'When I was young'.

× I was a fusiator when my mom prepared healthy food.

✓ I was fussy when my mom prepared healthy food.

'Fusiator' is not an English word; 'fussy' (adjective) correctly describes a picky eater. Use 'I was fussy' for a state.

× I refused them.

✓ I refused it.

Refuse + object here refers to 'healthy food' (singular/uncountable), so use singular pronoun 'it' not 'them'.

× It's effects my mental.

✓ It affected my mental health.

Use the verb 'affected' (past) not noun 'effects' and supply the noun phrase 'mental health' rather than 'my mental'. Also past tense matches earlier context.

× Yes, I find fascinating about new cuisine and try new foods when I go to abroad or when I visit new city For example, my last holiday I was.

✓ Yes, I find it fascinating to try new foods when I go abroad or visit a new city. For example, on my last holiday I...

Use 'find it fascinating to + infinitive' and 'go abroad' (no 'to'), 'visit a new city' needs an article. The sentence was incomplete; 'For example, on my last holiday I...' should be completed with an action. Use 'on my last holiday' for time expression.

× When I was child, I ate a lot of fast food.

✓ When I was a child, I ate a lot of fast food.

Use the indefinite article 'a' with 'child' in this expression: 'when I was a child'.

× Uh, I was fancy hater.

✓ Uh, I was a picky eater.

'Fancy hater' is not correct English. Use 'picky eater' or 'fussy eater' to mean someone who dislikes certain foods; include article 'a'.

× Uh, sorry, I was ***** hater, uh, when my mom prepared a salad or vegetable food, like a salad, like a salad, I refuse.

✓ Uh, sorry, I was a picky eater when my mom prepared salads or vegetable dishes; I would refuse them.

Replace unclear '***** hater' with 'a picky eater'. Use plural 'salads' or 'vegetable dishes' and past habitual 'I would refuse them' or 'I refused them'. Also include article 'a' before 'picky eater'.