Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng với câu chủ đề, sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp. Tránh câu rời rạc; bổ sung lý do cụ thể ngắn gọn (1–2 chi tiết) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: nói “My favourite food is…” rồi giải thích vì sao (hương vị, tiện lợi, giá cả). Chú ý: dùng thì hiện tại đơn, cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng và từ vựng phù hợp (‘spicy noodles’, ‘tasty’, ‘affordable’).

例: My favourite food is spicy noodles. I like them because they are full of flavour and very affordable, so I can enjoy them often. I also enjoy hamburgers and pizza for their convenience.

提案: Cần dùng thì quá khứ khi nói về thói quen trong quá khứ và câu hoàn chỉnh. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I were' và 'I love' (sai thì). Nêu một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (‘When I was young, I liked...’), rồi bổ sung 1–2 lý do cụ thể và một so sánh ngắn giữa quá khứ và hiện tại bằng liên từ (‘but’, ‘now’).

例: When I was young, I liked noodles because they were cheap and quick to make. But now I prefer trying different dishes because I enjoy new flavours and experiences.

提案: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và tránh lý do lặp. Dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + reason), rồi đưa 1 ví dụ cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngôn ngữ: ‘different foods’, ‘different times of the year’, ‘I always eat hamburgers because...’. Hạn chế nói lấn cấn, dùng liên từ để liên kết ý.

例: No, I don't eat different foods at different times of the year. I usually eat the same things, like hamburgers, because they are cheap and convenient, so I often choose them regardless of the season.

提案: Cần trả lời rõ ràng về sự thay đổi với cấu trúc thích hợp (Yes, it has/No, it hasn't) và giải thích lý do cụ thể. Tránh câu không rõ nghĩa; dùng từ chính xác (‘prefer’, ‘vegetables’, ‘spicy noodles’). Thêm 1–2 chi tiết lý do (vị, sức khỏe, sở thích).

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to prefer sweets like candy and chocolate, but now I prefer vegetables and spicy noodles because I enjoy stronger flavours and want healthier options.

× I have many favorite foods, especially fast food such as hamburger, pizza and spicy noodle.

✓ I have many favorite foods, especially fast foods such as hamburgers, pizza, and spicy noodles.

The nouns 'hamburger' and 'spicy noodle' should be plural when listed as examples of types of fast food. Use plural forms for countable items when speaking generally about many types: 'hamburgers' and 'spicy noodles'. Also add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity.

× Was I like spicy noodle the most because it's very tight and it's very cheap to buy.

✓ I liked spicy noodles the most because they're very tasty and very cheap to buy.

The original sentence uses incorrect auxiliary 'Was' and wrong forms. For past preference use simple past 'I liked'. 'Spicy noodle' should be plural 'spicy noodles'. 'Tight' is incorrect adjective; use 'tasty'. Use contraction or full 'they are' to agree with plural noun.

× When I were young I love eating noodle because it's very cheap and easy to make.

✓ When I was young I loved eating noodles because they were very cheap and easy to make.

Subject-verb agreement in past tense: 'I were' is incorrect, use 'I was'. The main verb describing past habit should be past 'loved'. 'Noodle' should be plural 'noodles' and pronoun agreement requires 'they were' for plural noun.

× But now I want to try more and more powerful because I love different experiences and.

✓ But now I want to try more and more things because I love different experiences.

The word 'powerful' is inappropriate; likely meant 'things' or 'varieties'. Remove trailing 'and.' The present tense 'want' is fine; ensure sentence completes logically.

× No, I don't eat different food at different time of the year because if I want to eat hamburger I will always eat because it's very cheap and sustainable for every time of year I don't want to find.

✓ No, I don't eat different food at different times of the year because if I want to eat a hamburger I will always eat it; it's very cheap and available all year, so I don't bother looking for other foods.

Use plural 'times' for 'different times of the year'. Add article 'a' before 'hamburger'. Use object pronoun 'it' after 'eat'. 'Sustainable' is wrong in this context; use 'available' or 'sold' all year. Rephrase to make logical sense and add punctuation to separate clauses.

× Yes, my favorite food changed since I would try whenever dry.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since I was a child because I used to eat whatever was available when I was hungry.

The original is ungrammatical: 'since I would try whenever dry' is unclear. Use present perfect 'has changed' to describe change from past to now. Clarify the intended meaning with 'since I was a child' and 'used to eat whatever was available'.

× I like simple sweets like candy and chocolate but now I refer vegetables and spicy noodle because I it's very tasty and rest vegetable can have.

✓ I liked simple sweets like candy and chocolate, but now I prefer vegetables and spicy noodles because they are very tasty and vegetables can be healthier.

Verb tense: 'like' should be past 'liked' to contrast with 'now'. 'Refer' is incorrect verb; use 'prefer'. Nouns need correct plurality: 'spicy noodle' -> 'spicy noodles', 'vegetable' -> 'vegetables'. Use plural pronoun 'they' and 'are' for agreement. Clarify final idea: 'vegetables can be healthier' for meaning.