Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is very short and contains a likely vocabulary error ("Chucky" may be incorrect or unclear). Start with a clear topic sentence, briefly describe the food and say why you like it using one or two supporting details with linking words. Also watch pronunciation and choose the correct name of the dish.

例: My favourite food is chicken curry. I really enjoy it because it has rich spices and a creamy sauce. For example, I especially like the combination of turmeric and coconut milk, which makes it warm and comforting.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It seems you mixed up words ("football" and "looked like a girl"). Give a direct topic sentence about the food you liked as a child, then add one or two specific details (taste, occasion, or reason) and use correct tense and linking words.

例: When I was young, I loved eating sweet pancakes. They were soft and served with honey, and I often had them for Sunday breakfast, so they remind me of happy family mornings.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains irrelevant information. Begin with a clear yes/no response, then explain how your eating changes with the seasons (give specific examples and use linking words such as "for example" or "in winter"). Keep to two or three short sentences.

例: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I eat more salads and fruits because they feel refreshing, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to keep warm.

提案: Your answer has grammar mistakes and is repetitive. Give a clear statement about whether your favourite food has changed, then explain how tastes changed with specific reasons and use linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid fillers such as "you know".

例: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I preferred mildly spiced dishes, but over time I developed a stronger taste for very spicy food because I grew to enjoy the intense flavours.

× My favorite food is Chucky.

✓ My favorite food is chicken.

The student likely used a wrong or misspelled word 'Chucky' instead of 'chicken'. This is a lexical error rather than grammar, but it affects meaning. Replace with the correct noun 'chicken' so the sentence is clear and grammatically correct. Use correct spelling and vocabulary that matches the intended food name.

× When I remember when I were young, my favorite football looked like a girl.

✓ When I remember being young, my favorite football looked like a girl.

The clause 'when I were young' uses the wrong verb form for the subject I; use 'was' in simple past or rephrase with a gerund 'being' after 'remember'. Also 'When I remember when' is redundant; use 'When I remember being young' for clarity. This correction keeps narrative past reference and fixes verb form and redundancy.

× When I remember when I were young, my favorite football looked like a girl.

✓ When I remember being young, my favorite football looked like a girl.

'I were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I'. Subject-verb agreement requires 'I was' in the past tense. Alternatively, use 'remember being' to avoid a second verb. The suggested correction removes the agreement error and improves fluency.

× When I remember when I were young, my favorite football looked like a girl.

✓ When I remember being young, my favorite football looked like a girl.

The original sentence contains redundant 'when' clauses and awkward structure. Simplify to 'When I remember being young' to make the time clause clear. Clear sentence structure improves comprehension.

× Yes, of course, I really do. I eat it two times a day or of the year because I like it.

✓ Yes, of course I do. I eat it twice a day and at different times of the year because I like it.

The phrase 'two times a day' is acceptable but 'twice a day' is more natural. 'or of the year' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'and at different times of the year' to answer the examiner's question about seasonal eating. Maintain present tense for habitual actions.

× I eat it two times a day or of the year because I like it.

✓ I eat it twice a day and at different times of the year because I like it.

The original mixes frequency 'two times a day' with a malformed phrase 'or of the year'. 'Twice a day' is the correct quantifier for frequency; to express seasonal variation add 'at different times of the year'. Ensure quantifiers and time phrases are used correctly and not combined incorrectly.

× Yes, of course it change.

✓ Yes, of course it changed.

The student intended to refer to a change that occurred since childhood, so past tense 'changed' is appropriate. 'It change' is incorrect because verbs must agree with tense; for past events use past tense. If present perfect were preferred, 'it has changed' would also be acceptable.

× When I were young I like to eat spicy, but now when I'm a little I like to eat like extra spicy, you know?

✓ When I was young I liked to eat spicy food, but now I like extra-spicy food.

Multiple tense and word-choice errors: 'When I were young' should be 'When I was young' (past tense agreement). 'I like to eat spicy' should be past 'I liked to eat spicy food' to match 'when I was young'. The phrase 'now when I'm a little' is unclear; use 'now' for present. 'I like to eat like extra spicy' is colloquial and ungrammatical; 'I like extra-spicy food' is concise and natural. Ensure tense consistency (past for past habits, present for current habits) and choose precise nouns ('spicy food').

× When I were young I like to eat spicy, but now when I'm a little I like to eat like extra spicy, you know?

✓ When I was young I liked to eat spicy food, but now I like extra-spicy food.

'When I were young' is incorrect for the singular subject; use 'was'. 'I like' should be 'I liked' to show past habitual action. Fixing subject-verb agreement and keeping tense consistent removes confusion.