Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olabilir. Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın, ardından bir veya iki destekleyici detay ekleyin. Gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimelerinden (uh, actually) kaçının. Örnek: neden sevdiğinizi belirtin (tat, rahatlık, anılar) ve bir bağlaç kullanarak açıklama yapın.

例: My favourite food is pizza because I enjoy its rich combination of cheese and tomato sauce. Also, it's very convenient for busy days, so I often order it when I'm short on time.

提案: Cevap daha açık ve mantıksal bir yapı istiyor. Bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın (ör. ‘When I was young I liked…’), ardından spesifik örnekler verin (hangi geleneksel yemekler) ve nedenlerini bağlaçlarla açıklayın. Gereksiz ve tekrar eden kelimeleri çıkarın.

例: When I was young, I enjoyed traditional Turkish dishes such as lentil soup and stuffed grape leaves because my family often cooked them at home. Moreover, these meals reminded me of family gatherings and felt very comforting.

提案: Cevap net değil ve konuyla tam ilişkili değil. Soru mevsimlere göre yiyecek değişimini soruyor; bu yüzden mevsimlere göre ne yediğinizi belirtin ve bir örnek verin. Deneyim anlatıyorsanız, kısa ve açık sebepler verin, dolgu sözcüklerden kaçının.

例: Yes, I usually eat lighter foods like salads and grilled fish in summer, while in winter I prefer hearty stews and soups. For example, last winter I ate a lot of beef stew because it was very warming.

提案: Cevap mantıklı ama dağınık ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Bir konu cümlesiyle değişimi belirtin, sonra nedenleri açık şekilde verin (ör. daha fazla dışarıda yemek, tat tercihleri). Kısa bağlaçlarla bağlantı kurun ve tekrar eden kelimeleri kaldırın.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I loved rice dishes prepared by my family, but now I prefer fast food like pizza because I often eat out with friends and enjoy the convenience.

× My favorite food is pizza actually. I love eating pizza because it's more delicious and uh.

✓ My favorite food is pizza, actually. I love eating pizza because it's very delicious.

The phrase 'more delicious' implies a comparison but no comparison target is given. Use 'very delicious' or simply 'delicious' to emphasize quality. Also add a comma before 'actually' for natural phrasing. Avoid filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Say 'My favorite food is pizza. I love eating pizza because it's very delicious.'

× Actually, I like I did. I was a child. I prefer traditional food. Actually, I really interested in Turkish food culture and I I very young. I prefer this.

✓ When I was a child, I liked traditional food. I was really interested in Turkish food culture when I was very young, so I preferred it.

Tense and verb form errors: 'I like I did' is ungrammatical; use past tense 'liked' for past habit. 'I really interested' misses the verb 'was' (past simple). 'I I very young' is incomplete; include 'when I was very young'. Maintain past tense consistently for past-time statements. Suggestion: Use 'When I was a child, I liked traditional food. I was really interested in Turkish food culture when I was very young.'

× Yes, uh, one time I tried the sushi, but I, I remember really terrible experience because I though I am not uh, tested umm.

✓ Yes, one time I tried sushi, but I remember having a really terrible experience because I thought I didn't like the taste.

Use 'having' after 'remember' to describe a past experience. 'Tried the sushi' — drop 'the' before uncountable/general food 'sushi'. 'I though I am not tested' is unclear and wrong; likely meant 'I thought I didn't like the taste' or 'I thought it didn't suit me'. Suggestion: 'I remember having a really terrible experience because I thought I didn't like the taste.'

× Yes, I I was a child, I would love to rise, but nowadays I don't eat this. I really love umm, fast food culture. I'm really eat too much, for example pizza.

✓ When I was a child, I used to love rice, but nowadays I don't eat it. I really love fast food culture. I eat too much, for example pizza.

Mixed and incorrect tense/modal use: 'I would love to rise' is incorrect for past habit — use 'used to love rice'. 'I don't eat this' should match the noun 'it'. 'I'm really eat too much' is ungrammatical; use 'I eat too much'. Also correct 'rise' to 'rice'. Suggestion: 'When I was a child, I used to love rice, but nowadays I don't eat it. I really love fast food culture. I eat too much, for example pizza.'