Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and accurate with vocabulary, avoid repetition and irrelevant words, and organize your answer with a direct topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Mention what the dish is (brief description or ingredients), give one or two specific reasons with correct word choice, and keep the response concise (no more than 4–5 sentences). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

例: My favourite food is manti, a type of dumpling filled with spiced meat and onions. I especially like it because the dough is soft and the filling is very flavorful. After a long day, a warm plate of manti is comforting and satisfying, so I often choose it for dinner.

提案: This answer is simple and direct, which is good. To improve, add one specific reason or a short detail about why you liked it (taste, texture, memories), and use a linking word to make the sentence flow. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

例: When I was young I loved manti because I enjoyed the juicy meat filling and the soft dough. I often begged my parents to make it, so I could eat it several times a week.

提案: Answer is on the right track but incomplete and ends abruptly. Finish the last item and add a brief reason to make it more specific. Use linking words like 'while' and 'because' for coherence. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer light and fresh foods like fruits and salads because they help me feel cool and energetic. In winter I usually eat heavier, warmer dishes such as soups and stews to stay warm.

提案: Good structure with direct response and contrast. Improve grammar (past tense), correct word order, and add one specific example of a childhood favourite and a current preference to make it concrete. Use linking words like 'but' and 'now' correctly.

例: Yes, it has changed. As a child I liked simple, sweet snacks such as candy and sweet pastries, but now I prefer healthier, more balanced meals like grilled fish with vegetables because they make me feel better and more energetic.

× I'm really fond of of a dish called mante.

✓ I'm really fond of a dish called mante.

There is a duplicated preposition 'of of' causing an adjective/adverb phrasing error and redundancy. Remove the extra 'of' to make the sentence grammatical: 'fond of a dish'. Suggestion: proofread for repeated words.

× It's incredibly tasty and quite chilling, so I never get tired of it.

✓ It's incredibly tasty and quite satisfying, so I never get tired of it.

The adjective 'chilling' is incorrect in this context because it usually means scary or cold; the speaker likely intended a positive adjective describing enjoyment. Replace with 'satisfying' (or 'comforting') to match the intended meaning and keep collocation with 'tasty'. Suggestion: choose adjectives that fit the intended sentiment.

× I especially enjoy it after a long day because the flowers are comforting and the portion is satisfying.

✓ I especially enjoy it after a long day because the flavors are comforting and the portion is satisfying.

The word 'flowers' is incorrect and likely a typographical or word choice error; 'flavors' fits the context of food. This is an adjective/adverb/content word choice issue. Replace with 'flavors'. Suggestion: check for homophones and typos and ensure word choice matches context.

× I was crazy about a dish called manti.

✓ I was crazy about a dish called manti.

This sentence is already correctly in the past tense and matches the question about childhood preference. No change needed. Suggestion: maintain past simple for past habits.

× I could easily eat it up every day.

✓ I could easily eat it every day.

The phrasal verb 'eat up' can mean finish food but is unnecessary here; 'eat it every day' is clearer. This is a style/use issue within past tense. Remove 'up' to avoid unintended emphasis. Suggestion: prefer simpler constructions for clarity.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

Missing comma after interjection 'Yes' is punctuation rather than grammar error; however sentence is grammatically correct. Add comma for standard written form. Suggestion: include comma after short interjections.

× In summer I prefer light and fresh foods like fruits and salads, while in winter I usually eat heavier and warmer foods such as soups and.

✓ In summer I prefer light, fresh foods like fruits and salads, while in winter I usually eat heavier, warmer foods such as soups and stews.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'such as soups and.' This is a sentence structure/ellipsis error. Complete the list with a parallel item (for example 'stews') and add commas between coordinate adjectives ('light, fresh'). Suggestion: ensure lists are complete and adjectives are punctuated correctly.

× Yes it has changed.

✓ Yes, it has changed.

Add comma after 'Yes' for correct punctuation in writing; the tense 'has changed' (present perfect) fits the question about change over time. Sentence is otherwise correct. Suggestion: punctuate interjections appropriately.

× When I was child I like it simple and sweet foods, but now I prefer healthier and more balanced meals.

✓ When I was a child I liked simple, sweet foods, but now I prefer healthier, more balanced meals.

Multiple tense and article errors: 'When I was child' needs the article 'a child' (article error). 'I like' should be past tense 'I liked' to match 'When I was a child' (past tense issue). 'It simple and sweet foods' is ungrammatical; remove 'it' and make 'simple, sweet foods' with comma between adjectives (order/ punctuation). Also add parallel punctuation in the second clause. Suggestion: use 'a child' for the noun phrase, use past simple for past habits, remove extraneous pronouns, and separate coordinate adjectives with commas.