Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer a bit more natural and add one or two specific details to expand. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain why you like it and give a short example or context. Use a linking word (for example / because / so) to connect ideas.

例: My favourite food is watermelon. I love it because it’s very juicy and refreshing, especially on hot days, so it helps me cool down. For example, I often eat slices of watermelon after playing sports in summer.

提案: Answer in past tense and be more specific about the types of sweet foods you liked. Provide a short reason and one example. Avoid filler words and personal labels like “I am a sweet person.” Use a linking word such as because or for example to clarify.

例: When I was young, I liked sweet foods, especially cakes and candies. Because I had a sweet tooth, I often chose chocolate cake after special occasions, for example on my birthday.

提案: This one-word answer is too short. Give a direct topic sentence and add specific details about how your diet changes with seasons, using a linking word like in winter/for example/so. Provide one or two concrete examples to show variation.

例: Yes, I do. In summer I eat more fruits like watermelon and mango to stay hydrated, while in winter I prefer warm dishes such as soups and stews to keep warm.

提案: Give a clear, grammatical sentence and add a brief reason or example explaining why your preference stayed the same. Use linking words such as because or so, and correct the phrasing (“the same as when I was a child”).

例: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed since I was a child because I have always enjoyed the sweet, refreshing taste of watermelon, and I still eat it regularly in summer.

× I like to eat the sweet food because I am a sweet person, Uh.

✓ I liked to eat sweet foods because I was a sweet child.

The question asks about when you were young, so the past tense should be used (liked, was). Also 'sweet food' is uncountable in this context; use 'sweet foods' or just 'sweets'. 'Sweet person' is ambiguous for childhood preference; 'sweet child' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time frame asked and use plural or uncountable form for types of food.

× Uh, no, I still like the food today. It is as same as my childhood.

✓ Uh, no, I still like the same foods today as I did in my childhood.

The student uses awkward tense and structure. 'Still like' is present tense and acceptable, but 'the food' is too specific; use 'the same foods' or 'the same food' and follow with 'as I did in my childhood' to compare past and present. 'It is as same as' is incorrect English; correct comparative structure is 'the same ... as'. Ensure the time reference 'in my childhood' is placed after the clause for clarity.