Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và độ tự nhiên: sửa lỗi từ vựng (tên món ăn) và dùng cấu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn; mở rộng thêm một câu chi tiết cụ thể về thành phần hoặc hoàn cảnh ăn để trả lời giàu thông tin nhưng không quá dài. Sử dụng tối đa 3–4 câu, tránh từ lặp. Ví dụ, nêu rõ vì sao bạn thích món ấy hơn các món khác và khi nào bạn thường ăn nó.

例: My favourite food is Vietnamese noodles, especially bún mắm (a fermented fish noodle soup). I love it because it is rich in flavor and has a comforting broth with fresh herbs. I often eat it on weekends when I want something satisfying but not too heavy.

提案: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt: dùng thì quá khứ chính xác (“I was really into”), tránh các cụm từ lộn xộn như “Taste what?”. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ món ăn yêu thích hoặc lý do) và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc. Giữ 2–3 câu, rõ ràng và liên kết.

例: When I was young, I was really into fast food and snacks, especially burgers and fries. I didn't care much about nutrition at that time because I just liked the taste and convenience. Over time I started paying more attention to healthier options.

提案: Trả lời cần trực tiếp hơn và có cấu trúc: bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No và giải thích ngắn), sau đó nêu ví dụ cụ thể theo mùa nếu có. Dùng liên từ để nối ý và tránh câu quá dài, lặp từ. Nếu không thay đổi nhiều theo mùa, nêu lý do ngắn gọn.

例: Not really — I don't change my diet much with the seasons because I'm busy with classes. I usually eat at affordable places near campus, so I stick to quick meals like rice bowls or sandwiches year-round. Occasionally I choose warmer soups in winter.

提案: Sửa phát âm/diễn đạt lúng túng và lỗi từ: tránh các câu nói lướt như “Like I say the boat” và các từ dừng “Uh”. Dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: chủ đề + so sánh ngắn giữa trước và nay + ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp (nutritious, healthier) và giữ 2–3 câu.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I preferred fast food and snacks, but now I prefer more nutritious dishes such as pho or bún chả. I choose these foods because they are healthier and more satisfying.

× Definitely Vietnamese noodle, especially mundeo.

✓ Definitely Vietnamese noodles, especially mundeo.

The noun 'noodle' should be plural when referring to a type of food in general. Use 'noodles' to indicate the dish category. Suggestion: use plural forms for countable foods when speaking generally (e.g., 'noodles', 'cookies').

× When I was a kid I would really into fast food and snack.

✓ When I was a kid I was really into fast food and snacks.

The structure 'would really into' is incorrect and 'snack' should be plural. Use 'was really into' for past state and plural 'snacks' when talking about general items. Suggestion: say 'was really into fast food and snacks.'

× Taste what? Everything.

✓ As for taste, I liked everything.

'Taste what? Everything.' is fragmented and unclear. Rephrase to a complete sentence that matches the past context, e.g., 'As for taste, I liked everything.' Suggestion: form full sentences with subject and verb to express ideas clearly.

× I'm not really sure about it because I'm quite busy with classes so I usually grab something near campus and there are plenty of affordable places around so I don't need to worry about what I can eat today.

✓ I'm not really sure because I'm quite busy with classes, so I usually grab something near campus; there are plenty of affordable places around, so I don't need to worry about what to eat today.

Sentence is long and has awkward pronoun/use of 'it' and 'what I can eat today.' Remove vague 'about it' and use infinitive 'what to eat' for clarity. Suggestion: break long sentences with commas or semicolons and use 'what to eat' rather than 'what I can eat.'

× Like I say the boat, when I was a kid I was really into fast food and snack Uh, but now I really care about nutrient dishes like bunzio or pho.

✓ Like I said before, when I was a kid I was really into fast food and snacks, but now I really care about nutritious dishes like bunzio or pho.

'Like I say the boat' is incorrect phrasing and 'snack' should be plural. Use 'Like I said before' to refer back, 'snacks' plural, and 'nutritious' instead of 'nutrient' to describe food. Suggestion: use correct connective phrases ('like I said before') and correct adjective forms ('nutritious').