Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the dish correctly, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy.

例: My favourite food is dak-galbi, a Korean spicy stir-fry. I enjoy spicy food because the strong flavors are comforting and help me relax after a stressful day.

提案: Answer directly and improve coherence: use a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct tense and smoother linking words (e.g., 'but', 'because', 'so'). Avoid filler sounds.

例: When I was young, I liked eating much spicier food than I do now. However, my stomach is more sensitive these days, so I avoid very hot dishes because they upset me.

提案: Give a concise direct answer and use linking words to structure the response. Clarify contradictory statements (e.g., 'ate a lot' vs 'couldn't experience various food'). Provide a specific seasonal example if possible.

例: Yes, I do eat different foods throughout the year because I travel and follow seasonal ingredients. For example, this year I tried several local specialties while visiting Paris, and I really enjoyed fresh croissants in the morning.

提案: Clarify the dish name and give a coherent comparison between past and present preferences. Use complete sentences and link ideas (e.g., 'but now', 'because'). Avoid unclear fragments and irrelevant words.

例: When I was a child I loved very spicy ramen (we called it ‘Budae-jjigae’), but now I prefer healthier, more balanced meals because I care more about nutrition and digestion.

× My favorite food is Taco game which is Korean spicy food.

✓ My favorite food is tacos, which are a Korean spicy dish.

Article errors and noun form: 'Taco game' is unclear and likely incorrect; use plural 'tacos' for a general favourite. Also use 'a' with singular 'dish' and change verb agreement 'which are' to match plural 'tacos'. Use 'Korean spicy dish' instead of 'Korean spicy food' for clarity.

× I would like to eating spicy food it makes feel comfortable and get rid of stressed.

✓ I would like to eat spicy food because it makes me feel comfortable and helps me get rid of stress.

Incorrect verb form: after 'would like' use the base verb 'eat' not the -ing form. Missing subject 'me' after 'makes' and incorrect phrase 'get rid of stressed' should be 'get rid of stress' or 'relieve stress'. Add conjunction 'because' and verb 'helps' for clarity.

× When I was young I liked eating spicy food more than now.

✓ When I was young I liked eating spicy food more than I do now.

Tense and comparison: compare past preference to present using 'I do now' for correct present reference. Original lacks auxiliary 'do' for present simple.

× Uh, this day I don't have a a strong stomach then that times.

✓ These days I don't have as strong a stomach as I did then.

Sentence structure and article errors: 'this day' should be 'these days' for current period. Remove duplicate 'a'. Use comparative structure 'as strong a stomach as I did then' to compare present to past.

× So before I used to eat more the spicy food.

✓ So before I used to eat spicy food more often.

Word order and article: 'the spicy food' is unnecessary; use 'spicy food' and place adverb 'more often' at end. 'Used to eat spicy food more often' is natural.

× Yes, every year I ate different food, but especially this year I ate a lot because I traveled to many countries so I couldn't experience various food.

✓ Yes, every year I eat different foods, but especially this year I ate a lot because I traveled to many countries and experienced a variety of foods.

Tense consistency: use present simple 'eat' for habitual action. For the specific year, past tense 'ate' and 'traveled' are fine. 'Couldn't experience' is wrong; if you did experience, use 'experienced'. Use 'a variety of foods' instead of 'various food'.

× And when I went to Paris I ate croissant.

✓ And when I went to Paris I ate a croissant.

Article missing: singular countable noun 'croissant' requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× It was so good.

✓ It was so good.

This sentence is correct; past tense 'was' matches the past event. No change needed.

× When I taught when I was child I love Buddha which is really spicy ramen, but nowadays I prefer eating.

✓ When I thought I was a child I loved budae-jjigae, which is a really spicy ramen-like stew, but nowadays I prefer more nutritious food.

Multiple problems: 'taught' should be 'thought' or better 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'loved' for childhood. 'Buddha' is incorrect word; likely 'budae-jjigae' (Korean spicy stew) or similar; clarify as 'budae-jjigae' and describe it as 'ramen-like stew'. 'Prefer eating' is incomplete; specify 'prefer more nutritious food'.

× Nutrient food. I'm in balance. Food in the ingredients. Liquor.

✓ Now I prefer nutritious food and try to keep a balanced diet; I pay attention to the ingredients and avoid alcohol.

Fragmented sentences and word choice: 'Nutrient food' should be 'nutritious food'. 'I'm in balance' becomes 'I try to keep a balanced diet'. 'Food in the ingredients' is unclear; use 'pay attention to the ingredients'. 'Liquor' is out of place; clarify intent, e.g., 'avoid alcohol'.