Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子结构和语法需更准确，注意主谓一致（favorite food is），避免冗余。回答应更自然并给出具体例子或原因，用连接词衔接观点。例如说明哪种小吃、味道或做法让你喜欢。控制在最多5句。

例: My favourite foods are Beijing snacks, especially jianbing (Chinese pancakes) and Peking duck. I like jianbing for its crispy texture and savory sauce, and I enjoy Peking duck for its tender meat and crispy skin. Also, many of these dishes include vegetables, which makes them feel balanced and not too heavy.

提案: 注意时态和语法（liked, were unhealthy, enjoyed）。回答要简洁并补充具体细节，例如最常吃的快餐、和朋友一起吃的场景，用连接词衔接原因或感受。控制句数在5以内。

例: When I was young I liked fast food such as burgers and fries from McDonald's and KFC. Although it was unhealthy, I enjoyed eating it with my friends because it was convenient and fun. Over time I realised it was not good for my health and started eating more balanced meals.

提案: 提高表达准确性与连贯性（seasonal foods, according to Chinese doctors）。减少语法错误（family, nutrition），并给出具体季节性食物例子与原因，使用连接词使逻辑清晰。句子不宜过多。

例: Yes, I eat different foods in different seasons. For example, in winter I eat more warming foods like lamb and ginger, while in summer I prefer cooling fruits and salads. According to traditional advice, seasonal foods help maintain health, and I also enjoy sharing these meals with my family.

提案: 注意语法和用词（enjoyed, unhealthy, pay more attention to）。避免模糊表达（'something like that'），提供明确对比和原因，举例说明现在常吃的健康食物及其好处，最多5句。

例: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since childhood. I used to eat a lot of junk food, but now I prefer healthy options like steamed vegetables, lean beef and whole grains. I changed because I learned more about nutrition and want to get essential vitamins and minerals for better health.

× My favorite food are Beijing snacks like pancakes and roast duck.

✓ My favorite food is Beijing snacks like pancakes and roast duck.

该句主语是不可数名词短语“favorite food”（食物），谓语应使用单数形式“is”。原句使用复数动词“are”导致主谓不一致。建议将动词改为单数“is”，或者把主语改为可数复数形式如“My favorite foods are …”。

× From my perspective they are healthy as I know most of them are made of vegetable and healthy meat.

✓ From my perspective they are healthy, as I know most of them are made of vegetables and lean meat.

“vegetable”在此应为复数“vegetables”或不可数形式“vegetables/vegetables”，且“healthy meat”表达不自然，应使用“lean meat”（瘦肉）更贴切。建议复数化蔬菜并使用更准确的名词搭配。

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? / When I was young I liked junk food, even they would be unhealthy, but I enjoying the eat with my friends at McDonald's and KFC.

✓ When I was young, I liked junk food. Even though it was unhealthy, I enjoyed eating it with my friends at McDonald's and KFC.

原句中时态与形式混乱：第一句时态“liked”正确；后半句“The y would be unhealthy”时态与代词使用错误，应为“it was unhealthy”。动词“enjoying”使用错误，应该用过去式“enjoyed”；“the eat”应为动名词短语“eating it”。建议将句子拆分并使用一致的过去时态，代词改为“it”，动词用过去式，动名词正确搭配。

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? / Yes, I like eating different food at different seasons. From Chinese doctor's perspective, seasoned food is healthy. I enjoy the eat with my families. I think I can get various nutritions from them.

✓ Yes, I like eating different foods in different seasons. From a Chinese doctor's perspective, seasonal food is healthy. I enjoy eating with my family. I think I can get various nutrients from them.

“at different seasons”应为“in different seasons”；“different food”应为复数“different foods”；“seasoned food”应为“seasonal food”（季节性的食物）而非“seasoned”；“the eat”错误，应为“eating”；“my families”应为单数“my family”；“nutritions”不可数，正确为“nutrients”。建议修改介词、名词单复数及词汇搭配以符合习惯用法。

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? / Yes, when I was a child I enjoying eating junk food they could they couldn't healthy. Now I pay more attention on the healthy foods like vegetables, beef and something like that. I can get various trace elements from them.

✓ Yes. When I was a child I enjoyed eating junk food; it wasn't healthy. Now I pay more attention to healthy foods like vegetables, beef and things like that. I can get various trace elements from them.

原句中“I enjoying”应为过去式“I enjoyed”；“they could they couldn't healthy”结构混乱，应改为“it wasn't healthy”；“pay attention on”习惯搭配为“pay attention to”；“something like that”更自然为“things like that”。此外“trace elements”可保留。建议使用正确的动词形式、否定句结构及介词搭配，并用更自然的短语代替笨拙表达。