Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意语法与句子简洁。可以先直接说出喜爱的食物，然后给一到两句简短原因或感受，避免重复和冗长表达。注意主谓一致和时态，例如用 "is" 而不是复数混用。

例: My favourite food is candy, especially chocolate and gummies. I enjoy them because they are sweet and they lift my mood whenever I eat them.

提案: 回答过去喜好时要用正确的过去时态，句子要更连贯，避免语法错误（如 their→they're/it's）。可以先用一句过去时陈述喜好，再用一两句说明原因并承认缺点，使用连接词如 "although" 或 "because"。

例: When I was young, I loved eating chips because my parents rarely allowed snacks, so I enjoyed them as a treat. Although I knew they were unhealthy, I couldn't resist their salty taste.

提案: 回答要直接并条理清晰。说明是否随季节改变饮食时可先肯定或否定，再举具体例子并简短说明原因。注意单复数和词汇搭配（e.g. "throughout the year"）。

例: No, I usually don't change my diet according to the seasons; I tend to eat sweets like candies and biscuits throughout the year. Sometimes I might prefer warm drinks in winter, but my snack choices stay the same.

提案: 回答要用正确的完成或现在完成时描述变化（或无变化），并注意语法（e.g. "has always been"）。说明原因时用简洁自然的表达并避免不必要的词语。

例: No, my favourite food has always been sweet treats like chocolate and cookies. I especially enjoy chocolate because it makes me feel happy and comforted after a long day.

× While my favorite foods are candies because they're very sweet, when I eat them I feel very happy.

✓ My favorite food is candy because it's very sweet; when I eat it, I feel very happy.

原句中“favorite foods are candies”用复数和复数名词搭配不自然，且在这里更常说单数“favorite food”或不可数“candy”。另外代词需与单数名词一致，故将“they're”改为“it's”，并将“them”改为“it”。建议：当表达偏好的种类或总体时常用单数或不可数形式，代词需要与其指代的名词在数上一致。

× I like chips when I was young because my parents don't make me eat lots of snacks, but I like chips because their is very delicious. Even though I knew they're a bit unhealthy.

✓ I liked chips when I was young because my parents didn't make me eat many snacks, and I liked chips because they were very delicious, even though I knew they were a bit unhealthy.

句子中时态混用：提到过去应使用一般过去时，所以将“like”改为“liked”；“when I was young”作为过去时间标志，相关动词需用过去式。否定“don't make me”应改为过去式“didn't make me”。“their is very delicious”包含拼写和语法错误，正确应为“they were very delicious”或更自然地说“they tasted very good”。最后一句也需过去时“knew they were”。建议：遇到表示过去的时间状语（如 when I was young）时，整个句子保持过去时一致。注意 many 与 lots of 的用法及可数名词复数形式。

× I don't eat different foods at different times of the year because my favorite food is candy, our candies, biscuits and other thing. I usually eat them all of the year.

✓ I don't eat different foods at different times of the year because my favorite foods are candy, biscuits and other things. I usually eat them all year round.

原句中“our candies”应为“or candies”（拼写错误为 our），且“other thing”应为复数“other things”。短语“all of the year”不自然，常用“all year”或“all year round”。建议：列举多项时用复数形式，注意连词 or 的拼写；表示全年可用“all year round”。

× No, my favorite foods are always been sweet candies like chocolate and cookies. I especially love chocolate because it's made me feel happy and comfortable after long wait.

✓ No, my favorite foods have always been sweet candies like chocolate and cookies. I especially love chocolate because it makes me feel happy and comfortable after a long wait.

“are always been”时态错误，正确应为现在完成时“have always been”表示从过去到现在持续的状态。第二句中“it's made me feel”用法错误，应该用一般现在时“it makes me feel”来表达一般事实或习惯性的感受；“after long wait”缺冠词，应为“after a long wait”。建议：表示从过去延续到现在用现在完成时；描述习惯性或一般事实用一般现在时；注意冠词的使用。