Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand your answer with one or two brief reasons or details to make it more natural and informative. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences) and use a linking word to connect ideas.

例: My favorite food is pizza because I love the combination of melted cheese and fresh tomato sauce. For example, I usually choose a thin-crust Margherita when I want something light, but I enjoy meat toppings when I want a heartier meal.

提案: Use correct tense and a more natural structure: start with a clear topic sentence, use a linking word to add a specific detail or example, and avoid short dismissive endings like "That's it."

例: When I was young, I liked eating vegetables because my mother always made fresh salads for me. For instance, she often included cucumbers and carrots dressed with olive oil, which made them taste nicer.

提案: This answer is unclear and has many grammar and coherence issues. Organize your response: answer the question about seasonal food first, then mention travel experiences as an additional detail. Use correct tense and clear vocabulary; avoid hesitations and give one or two specific examples.

例: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I prefer salads and cold dishes, while in winter I enjoy stews. When I travel, I also try local specialties — for instance, I tried sushi in Japan and camel meat during a trip to Saudi Arabia.

提案: Make the timeline and reasons clearer with correct verb forms. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting reasons using linking words like "because" or "since."

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child because I started eating pizza and discovered many other dishes while travelling. For example, trying different cuisines on trips expanded my tastes, so now I enjoy a wide variety of foods from around the world.

× I really like vegetables when I was younger, 'cause my mother always cooked me a salad, That's it.

✓ I really liked vegetables when I was younger, because my mother always made me a salad.

Tense mismatch: 'like' is present tense but context 'when I was younger' requires past tense. Use 'liked' and 'made' (past of 'make') to keep past-time consistency; replace informal ' 'cause' with 'because' and 'cooked me a salad' with 'made me a salad' for natural phrasing.

× Of course, especially when I was in other countries, like when I'm in Japanese.

✓ Of course, especially when I was in other countries, like when I was in Japan.

Incorrect preposition and noun form: use 'in Japan' (country name) and past tense 'was' to match 'when I was in other countries'. 'I'm in Japanese' is grammatically incorrect and mixes adjective and present tense.

× I, I recently at, uh, sushi when I was in Saudi Arabia, I'm eating, umm, the camel's meat.

✓ I recently ate sushi when I was in Saudi Arabia, and I also ate camel meat.

Sentence has wrong verb form and mixed tenses: 'recently at' should be 'recently ate' (past simple). 'I'm eating' should be past 'I also ate' to match past context. Simplify 'the camel's meat' to 'camel meat' for natural English.

× Yes it has changed since since I start eating pizza and when I travel to other country I'm trying all different food from across the world and that's the reason my favorite food change since I was a kid.

✓ Yes, it has changed since I started eating pizza, and when I travelled to other countries I tried many different foods from around the world, so my favorite food has changed since I was a kid.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: use past simple 'started' after 'since' to indicate the time when the change began; 'travel' should be past 'travelled' and 'I'm trying' should be past 'I tried' to match timeframe. 'All different food' should be 'many different foods' (plural). 'Change' should be 'has changed' to agree with present perfect 'Yes, it has changed' and to show result continuing to present.