Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Clarify vocabulary and organize answer with a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid pronunciation mistakes and filler words. Use linking words (for example, because, when) and correct word choice (crab, not "crap"). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

例: My favourite food is crab because I grew up eating seafood with my parents. When I was young they often took me to seafood restaurants, so I developed a taste for fresh shellfish. For example, I love steamed crab with garlic butter because it’s simple and flavorful.

提案: Start with a direct topic sentence and add one specific supporting detail using linking words. Reduce repetition and fillers; avoid repeating the same phrase. Use correct article forms (e.g., "seafood restaurants" without extra article) and past tense consistently.

例: When I was young, I especially liked seafood because my parents often took me to seafood restaurants. I remember enjoying grilled fish and prawns during family dinners, which made those meals memorable.

提案: Make the timeframe consistent and expand slightly with one more specific detail or reason. Use linking words like "for example" or "in winter/summer" to explain seasonal differences. Avoid abrupt tense shifts between present and past.

例: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, when I visited Japan I ate lots of sushi and seasonal dishes like hot nabe in winter, while in summer I preferred cold soba and light salads.

提案: Answer directly then give concise, specific examples of how travel influenced your tastes. Use correct phrases ("over time" not "over times") and avoid listing countries without linking them to the point. Keep to 2–4 sentences and include a linking word like "because" or "for example."

例: Yes, my favourite foods have changed over time because I started travelling at a young age. For example, visiting Japan introduced me to sushi and visiting Italy made me appreciate fresh pasta and olive oil, so now I enjoy a wider variety of cuisines.

× My favorite food is crap 'cause when I was younger I really love to eat a seafood and my parents always bug me to uh, seafood restaurants.

✓ My favorite food is crab because when I was younger I really loved to eat seafood and my parents always took me to seafood restaurants.

Errors: 'crap' is wrong word; should be 'crab' (vocabulary). 'I really love' conflicts with past timeframe 'when I was younger' so use past tense 'loved' (Present/Past tense mismatch; type 5). 'a seafood' is incorrect article usage; 'seafood' is uncountable so no 'a' (Article/uncountable noun error; type 22/11). 'bug me to uh, seafood restaurants' is informal and incorrect verb/preposition; use 'took me to seafood restaurants' or 'encouraged me to go to seafood restaurants' (incorrect use of preposition/verb; type 11/26). Suggestion: use correct vocabulary, match verb tense to time adverbial, remove incorrect article before uncountable noun, and use appropriate verb + preposition 'took me to'.

× So that's why I really love seafood and I want and crab is one of my favorite.

✓ So that's why I really love seafood, and crab is one of my favorites.

Errors: 'I want and' is incorrect and likely filler; remove it (sentence structure error; type 26). 'one of my favorite' requires plural noun 'favorites' or 'one of my favorite foods' (singular/plural/article error; type 1/22). Suggestion: remove extraneous words and use 'one of my favorites' or 'one of my favorite foods' to be grammatically correct.

× Like what I said earlier, I like seafood 'cause my parents always bug me to a seafood restaurants and yeah, it was a really great experience.

✓ Like I said earlier, I liked seafood because my parents always took me to seafood restaurants, and yeah, it was a really great experience.

Errors: 'what I said earlier' is wordy; 'Like I said earlier' is natural (style). 'I like' should match past reference 'when you were young' so use 'liked' (tense issue; type 5/6). 'bug me to a seafood restaurants' is incorrect: 'bug' is informal and wrong preposition; use 'took me to seafood restaurants' and remove 'a' before uncountable 'seafood' and plural 'restaurants' (preposition/article issues; type 11/22). Suggestion: match tense to context, remove unnecessary articles with uncountable nouns, and use correct verb+preposition 'took me to'.

× I do, especially when I was in Japan. I always eat sushi and the local dishes.

✓ I do, especially when I was in Japan. I always ate sushi and local dishes.

Errors: 'I do' is acceptable but the following clause 'when I was in Japan' requires past tense; 'I always eat' should be 'I always ate' (present/past tense mismatch; type 6/5). 'the local dishes' can be 'local dishes' without 'the' (article use; type 17/22). Suggestion: keep tense consistent across clauses and omit unnecessary definite article for general reference to dishes.

× Yes, it has changed over times, especially when I was in other country.

✓ Yes, it has changed over time, especially when I was in another country.

Errors: 'over times' should be 'over time' (incorrect pluralization; type 1/14). 'in other country' needs article 'another' before singular countable 'country' (article/pronoun error; type 22/12). Suggestion: use the idiom 'over time' and 'another country' for singular countable nouns.

× I've been travelling since I was seven years old.

✓ I've been travelling since I was seven years old.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'I've been travelling since I was seven years old' correctly uses present perfect continuous to indicate an action continuing from past to present. No change needed.

× I've been to Japan, I've been to Egypt, I've been to Saudi, I've been to Italy and I tried the local dishes.

✓ I've been to Japan, Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Italy, and I tried the local dishes.

Errors: listing items can be compressed for clarity. 'Saudi' should be 'Saudi Arabia' (country name). Mixing 'I've been to' (present perfect) with 'I tried' (past simple) is acceptable if meaning is that you visited and tried dishes during those visits; ensure consistency by keeping 'I tried the local dishes' to refer to those visits. Suggestion: use full country names and consistent punctuation to improve clarity.