Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğal fakat tekrarlayıcı ve dil bilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha etkili olmak için konu cümlesiyle başlayın, bir veya iki destekleyici detay verin (tat, içerik, kültürel önemi) ve bağlaçlar kullanarak akıcılığı artırın. Kelime tekrarından kaçının (ör. “I like meat” iki kez kullanılmış). Ayrıca “Iskandar” yerine tam adı ve kısa açıklama ekleyin. Örnek yapı: konu cümlesi + lezzet açıklaması + neden/kişisel bağ + kısa sonuç.

例: My favourite food is Iskandar, a traditional dish from my country. I enjoy it mainly for the tender meat and rich tomato-based sauce that give it a hearty flavour. Moreover, it reminds me of family gatherings, which makes it even more special.

提案: Zaman uyumu ve kesinlik gerekiyor; geçmişten bahsederken geçmiş zaman kullanın. Cümle yapısı daha net olmalı: konu cümlesi (çocukken ne yediğiniz) ve ardından sebep veya detay. Ayrıca kısa, ilgili bağlaçlar kullanın ve gereksiz belirsizlikten kaçının (“I'm not entirely sure” yerine spesifik olun).

例: When I was young I was quite a picky eater. I mostly ate French fries and pasta because they were simple and familiar, and I rarely ate vegetables.

提案: Cevap mevsimlere göre değişiklikten çok bir tercih itirafına dönüşmüş; doğrudan soruya yanıt verin ve ardından mevsime göre örnekler verin. Ayrıca generalizasyonlardan kaçının ve nedenleri açıklayın. Bağlaçlarla cümleyi akıcı yapın. "Eggs taste bad when it's hot" ifadesi kişisel tat beyanı, bunu sebep göstererek destekleyin.

例: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer lighter foods such as salads and cold noodles, while in winter I enjoy hearty stews and grilled meat because I like warm, comforting dishes in cold weather.

提案: Dil zamanı ve yapı hataları var; geçmiş için past tense kullanın. Cümleyi daha doğal yapmak için konu cümlesi + kısa neden + örnek verin. Ayrıca "my favorite food is meat" çok genel; spesifik bir yemek veya tür belirtmek daha güçlü olur.

例: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I avoided meat, but over time I began to enjoy grilled and roasted meats because of their flavours, so now hearty meat dishes are my favourite.

× My favorite food is Iskandar and it's really popular in my country.

✓ My favorite food is Iskandar, and it's really popular in my country.

The original sentence is acceptable but lacks a comma before the conjunction joining two independent clauses. Add a comma before 'and' to separate the clauses for correct punctuation and clarity. Suggestion: use a comma when joining two independent clauses with a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or).

× I like it because it has meat in it and I really like eating meat and it has good sauces too.

✓ I like it because it has meat in it, I really like eating meat, and it has good sauces too.

Run-on sentence: multiple independent clauses are joined without proper punctuation. Add commas and a coordinating conjunction to separate ideas. Also keep present simple tense consistent. Suggestion: break long sentences into shorter ones or use commas and conjunctions correctly.

× When I'm young I'm not entirely sure but I guess I am a picky eater because I only eat French fries and pasta and I really don't like eating vegetables.

✓ When I was young I'm not entirely sure, but I guess I was a picky eater because I only ate French fries and pasta and I really didn't like eating vegetables.

Tense inconsistency: the question asks about the past, so past tense should be used. Change present forms (am, eat, don't like) to past forms (was, ate, didn't like). Also add commas for clarity.

× When I'm young I'm not entirely sure but I guess I am a picky eater because I only eat French fries and pasta and I really don't like eating vegetables.

✓ I'm not entirely sure what I ate when I was young, but I guess I was a picky eater because I only ate French fries and pasta and I really didn't like vegetables.

Better phrasing and tense correction for clarity: use past tense 'was' and 'ate' for habits in the past and remove unnecessary 'eating' after 'like' to match common usage. Suggestion: answer past habits with 'used to' or past simple.

× Yes, especially in summers.

✓ Yes, especially in the summer.

Use of plural 'summers' is less natural here; with 'especially' we usually say 'in the summer' to refer to the season generally. Also include article 'the' before season when speaking generally.

× I really don't like eating eggs because it tastes so bad when it's hot.

✓ I really don't like eating eggs because they taste so bad when they're hot.

Pronoun-antecedent and subject-verb agreement: 'eggs' is plural, so pronouns and verbs should be plural ('they', 'taste', 'they're') not singular 'it'/'tastes'. Change to plural to match the noun.

× Yes, when I was young I don't prefer eating meat, but now I really like it and my favorite food is meat.

✓ Yes, when I was young I didn't prefer eating meat, but now I really like it and my favorite food is meat.

Tense inconsistency: speaking about the past requires past tense 'didn't prefer' rather than present 'don't prefer'. Keep contrast with present 'now I really like it' correct. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits or states.