Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammar errors and irrelevant phrases. Give a direct topic sentence naming the food, then add 1–2 clear supporting details (why you like it, when you eat it). Use correct grammar and simple linking words. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and avoid unrelated words like “baseball” or “preface.”

例: My favorite food is bánh mì from Vietnam. I like it because the crusty bread, savory fillings, and fresh herbs create a great mix of textures and flavors. I often eat it for breakfast on my way to school because it is quick and filling.

提案: The answer is confusing and uses inaccurate words. Start with a clear topic sentence stating the food you liked as a child, then explain reasons with simple, specific details and linking words (for example, because, as a result). Correct vocabulary (e.g., “durian” not “during”) and avoid filler words like “uh.”

例: When I was young, I loved durian. I liked it because it tastes very sweet and creamy, and its strong smell reminded me of family gatherings during holidays. Because of that, I always looked forward to special occasions when we could eat it.

提案: The answer is short and unclear. Provide a direct response (yes or no) and then give a clear explanation with a supporting detail or example. Use correct plural forms and time expressions (e.g., “different times of the year,” “each year”).

例: No, I usually don’t eat very different foods at different times of the year. I eat similar meals year-round, although I sometimes enjoy seasonal fruits like mangoes in summer.

提案: The response is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Start with a direct statement (Yes/No) and follow with specific reasons for the change, using linking words such as “because” or “so.” Be concise (2–3 sentences) and use correct verb tenses.

例: Yes, my favorite food has changed since I was a child. As a child I liked sweet fruits, but now I prefer savory dishes like grilled chicken because I enjoy stronger, more complex flavors.

× My favorite food is a Beni from Vietnam when me is a very good taste for me and very baseball traveling people and this is a preface and every morning I go to school.

✓ My favorite food is beni from Vietnam because it tastes very good to me; I often eat it when I travel. I go to school every morning.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and several unclear pronoun references (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). 'me is' is incorrect; subject pronoun 'I' or object 'me' must be used appropriately. Also 'a Beni' and 'this is a preface' are unclear and unnecessary. Suggestions: use 'it' to refer to the food, remove unrelated fragments, and split into clear clauses. Keep consistent subject pronouns and logical sequence of ideas.

× Looking food I like when I jump is uh, during during is the king of fruits because do they have a smell very best and tastes very good for me, very sweet and have a some better.

✓ The fruit I liked when I was young is durian; it is known as the king of fruits because it smells strong and tastes very sweet to me.

This sentence contains incorrect adjective/adverb placement and word choice (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). Phrases like 'Looking food I like when I jump' and 'do they have a smell very best' misuse adjectives/adverbs and verb forms. Suggestions: Use correct noun phrase 'The fruit I liked', past tense 'liked' for a childhood preference, and clear adjective phrases 'smells strong' and 'tastes very sweet' with the indirect object 'to me'.

× No, I don't eat different food at different time of the year because every year during have a one more in the year.

✓ No, I don't eat different foods at different times of the year because the seasons are the same each year.

This sentence has errors in quantifiers and countability (Grammar Problem Type ID 14) and pluralization. 'Different food' should be 'different foods' and 'different time' should be 'different times'. The phrase 'every year during have a one more in the year' is unclear; replace with a clear explanation such as 'the seasons are the same each year' or explain the reason more precisely.

× Yes, I had I had changed my favorite food when since I too because I because when I chew I have a morbid tested food in my lip.

✓ Yes, my favorite food changed since I was a child because my taste preferences changed when I began chewing new foods.

This sentence has incorrect past tense usage and tense agreement (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). Repeated 'I had I had changed' is redundant and ungrammatical; use simple past 'changed' or present perfect 'has changed' depending on context. 'When I chew I have a morbid tested food in my lip' is unclear and uses incorrect verb forms; replace with 'when I began trying new foods' or similar. Suggestions: choose a consistent tense (past for childhood changes) and use clear verbs like 'changed' and 'began'.