Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Responde de forma más directa y natural, usando una oración temática clara seguida de detalles breves y relevantes. Evita construcciones redundantes y errores gramaticales (por ejemplo, "the capital of the city Montevideo" es redundante). Usa enlaces simples para mayor fluidez.

例: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in Montevideo, but my neighborhood mainly has low-rise houses and small apartment blocks, so my home is quite low as well.

提案: Organiza la respuesta con una oración principal y luego explica con razones claras y conectores simples. Corrige errores gramaticales (por ejemplo, "not very fan" → "not a big fan") y elimina repeticiones. Menciona una excepción si aplica.

例: Not really, I'm not a big fan of taking photos. For example, my girlfriend often gets annoyed because I rarely take pictures of her, so she usually takes photos to capture special moments.

提案: Responde directamente y corrige tiempos verbales: usa presente para deseos actuales ("I would like to visit" o "I want to visit"). Simplifica la información geográfica y da detalles específicos sobre por qué te interesa, usando conectores para mayor coherencia.

例: Yes, I would like to visit a building outside Uruguay — the Anfield stadium in Liverpool, England. I'm a fan of Liverpool FC, so I hope to visit the stadium in two or three years to see a match and tour the grounds.

× No they are not.

✓ No, there are not.

The student used 'they are not' without context; the examiner asked about 'tall buildings' (plural), so 'there are not' or 'no' with a comma is appropriate to indicate absence. Use 'there are not' for existence of plural nouns. Suggestion: say 'No, there aren't' or 'No, there are none.'

× I live in the capital of the city Montevideo, but in my neighborhood there is no tall building so neither my home.

✓ I live in Montevideo, the capital city, but there are no tall buildings in my neighborhood, and neither is my home.

Original sentence has word order and connector errors. 'The capital of the city Montevideo' is redundant; use 'Montevideo, the capital city.' Use 'there are no tall buildings' for plural existence and 'neither is my home' to show the home also is not tall. Suggestion: simplify and use correct existential 'there are' and parallel structure.

× Not really, I'm not very fan of taking photos, in fact my girlfriend always being mad at me because I never take a photo of hers or or a hour so she has to take the photo that remember the the moment so.

✓ Not really. I'm not a big fan of taking photos; in fact, my girlfriend is always mad at me because I never take a photo of hers or of a moment, so she has to take the photos to remember the moment.

Several errors: missing article with 'fan' ('a big fan'), incorrect continuous form 'always being mad' should be 'is always mad' for habitual state, wrong possessive 'photo of hers or or a hour' unclear — corrected to 'photo of hers or of a moment'. Use 'take the photos to remember the moment' for clarity. Suggestion: use articles, correct present simple for habitual states, and simplify phrases.

× Yes, there is a building that I wanted to visit, but it is not in Uruguay, It is in England, in United Kingdom, precisely in Liverpool.

✓ Yes, there is a building that I want to visit, but it is not in Uruguay; it is in England, in the United Kingdom, specifically in Liverpool.

Mix of past 'wanted' and present desire; since the question asks about a building you'd like to visit now, use present 'want to visit'. Capitalization and article 'the United Kingdom' needed; 'precisely' is awkward—use 'specifically'. Suggestion: match tense to context and use correct country names with articles.

× I wanted to visit the stadium of the Liverpool football team, which name is Anfield Rd.

✓ I want to visit the stadium of Liverpool Football Club, which is called Anfield Road.

Use 'which is called' for naming; 'the Liverpool football team' can be 'Liverpool Football Club' and 'Anfield Rd' should be written 'Anfield Road' as the full name. Also change 'wanted' to 'want' to match previous correction. Suggestion: use proper nouns and standard expressions 'called' for names.

× I would like to visit in two or three years, uh.

✓ I would like to visit in two or three years.

Sentence is mostly correct but had a filler 'uh' and could be clearer: include the preposition 'in' before the time, which is present. Keep 'would like' to express future intention. Suggestion: remove filler words and keep concise phrasing.