Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更简洁且更自然，避免重复并提供具体细节。可以用一两句直接回答，然后用一两句补充可见范围或距离。例如说明从家里大约能看到台北101在什么方向、距离感或周围环境。注意语法（例如去掉重复的“in”），句子数不超过五句，使用衔接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes. I live in Taipei so I can see Taipei 101 from my home. It stands in the city center to the north of my apartment, and several other high-rises cluster around it, creating a distinctive skyline.

提案: 回答思路不错，但表达需更地道、语法更准确并补充具体例子。避免语法错误（如“historical building”应为“historical buildings”或“a historical building”），减少冗余（如两次说“take photo”）。可以说明一个具体的旅行拍照例子或喜欢拍摄的建筑特征。

例: Yes, I often photograph buildings when I travel, especially historical ones. For example, last year I took many photos of old temples because I enjoy their intricate carvings and the stories behind them.

提案: 需要纠正名称和形容词用法，并提供更具体原因和期待的细节。“Sagrada Familia”拼写正确；不要用“astonished”形容建筑，改用“astonishing”或“remarkable”。可以说明想参观的具体部分或原因（例如建筑风格、设计师高迪、想看内部彩窗或塔楼）。保持句子简短连贯。

例: Yes, I would love to visit the Sagrada Familia in Barcelona. I am fascinated by Gaudí’s unique designs and would like to see the elaborate facades and stained-glass windows up close.

× Living in the capital of Taiwan, I can see the tallest building in in Taiwan from my home, which is Taipei 101 in the center of the city.

✓ Living in the capital of Taiwan, I can see the tallest building in Taiwan from my home, which is Taipei 101 in the center of the city.

句中有重複的介詞短語“in in Taiwan”，這是打字或重複造成的錯誤，屬於冠詞/定語使用不當的範疇（此處也可視為句子修飾冗餘）。刪去多餘的“in”即可。建議细读句子，检查重复词语并去除多余部分。

× Taipei 101 is the tallest building and nearby there are many.

✓ Taipei 101 is the tallest building, and there are many buildings nearby.

原句“nearby there are many.” 缺少名词，导致量词或指代不明。根据语法需在“many”后接可数名词复数（many buildings）。建议在使用 many, few, several 等量词时确保后面跟合适的名词形式。

× Yes, of course I do take photos of buildings, especially when I travel.

✓ Yes, of course I do take photos of buildings, especially when I travel.

句子本身时态使用可以接受（一般现在时表示习惯），此处仅检查是否符合题表中的时态问题列表。保留原句，但注意在口语中可简化为“I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel.” 更自然。因无实际时态错误所以不做更改。

× I think historical building is more fascinating to me because I like ancient history and I think it's the best way to take my memory of travel by taking photo.

✓ I think historical buildings are more fascinating to me because I like ancient history, and I think taking photos is the best way to keep my travel memories.

原句存在多处问题：①“historical building”应为复数“historical buildings”以表示一般性偏好，属于单复数问题（也与形容词/名词搭配相关）；②“is more fascinating to me”可保留，但需与复数主语一致（are）；③“the best way to take my memory of travel by taking photo”结构不自然，动词搭配错误，应使用“keep my travel memories”或“preserve my travel memories by taking photos”。建议：注意名词单复数一致，使用合适动词短语（take photos, keep memories, preserve memories），并将句子拆成更清晰的部分。

× Yes, I would like to visit Sagra Familia in Spain, which is the most astonished building in 20th century.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Sagrada Familia in Spain, which is the most astonishing building of the 20th century.

错误包括：①专有名词拼写和冠词使用：应为“The Sagrada Familia”（西班牙著名教堂前常用定冠词）；②“most astonished building” 用词错误，应为“most astonishing building”因为建筑令人惊讶是主动作用，使用形容词“astonishing”；③“in 20th century”缺少定冠词，应为“the 20th century”。建议：注意专有名词正确拼写与定冠词的使用，区分-ed 与 -ing 形容词的含义（-ed 表示感受的人，-ing 表示造成该感受的事物）。

× I think it would be a wonderful and impressive memory to visit the astonished church in present.

✓ I think it would be a wonderful and impressive experience to visit the astonishing church in person.

原句问题有：①“astonished church”用词错误，教堂本身应用“astonishing”而不是“astonished”；②“memory”用词不当，拜访某地是一次“experience（经历/体验）”，而不是“memory”；③“in present”搭配错误，正确表达为“in person”（亲自）或“at present”（目前，但不符合语境）。建议：区分名词（memory, experience）和形容词（astonishing/astonished），并使用固定短语“in person”表示亲自去。