Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and concise, correct grammar and reduce repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Check subject-verb agreement and article use (e.g., “the new administrative capital”).

例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a mostly low‑rise residential district, so the only skyscrapers are in the new administrative capital about 40 kilometres away.

提案: Avoid grammatical mistakes and be more concise. Use a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and a linking word. Fix plural and article errors (e.g., "photos of buildings", "take photos of them").

例: Not usually. I only photograph ancient or historical buildings because their architecture and stories interest me, whereas ordinary modern buildings rarely catch my attention.

提案: Make the response fluent and grammatical, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct tense and agreement (e.g., "it's one of the tallest buildings", "it lights up at night").

例: Yes, I’d love to visit the new skyscraper in Egypt’s new capital because it is one of the tallest buildings in the world and is said to be spectacular when it lights up at night.

× No, there aren't any tall buildings around my home.

✓ No, there aren’t any tall buildings around my home.

The original sentence is correct in meaning and grammar; keep contraction 'aren't' with plural 'buildings'. No change needed. Suggestion: none.

× The district I'm living in is basically mainly low rise building.

✓ The district I live in is basically/mostly low-rise buildings.

Error: incorrect continuous tense and singular 'building' for a district that contains multiple buildings. Use simple present 'I live' for a permanent situation. Use the adverb 'mainly' or 'mostly' (choose one) and hyphenate 'low-rise' as a compound adjective. Change 'building' to plural 'buildings' to match reality and subject-verb agreement.

× The tall buildings only exist in the new capital Egypt, which is about 40 kilometers away.

✓ The tall buildings only exist in the new capital, Egypt, which is about 40 kilometers away.

Error: punctuation and phrasing—add a comma before 'Egypt' as an appositive. The rest is grammatically acceptable. 'Exist in' is fine; keep plural 'buildings'.

× No, I don't casually take photos of building.

✓ No, I don't casually take photos of buildings.

Error: count noun 'building' must be plural when speaking generally; no -ing issue beyond noun form. Change to 'buildings' to indicate general objects of photography.

× Only ancient buildings or historical buildings are the ones that catch my attention, so it's worth it for me to take photo of them.

✓ Only ancient or historical buildings are the ones that catch my attention, so it's worth it for me to take photos of them.

Errors: redundancy ('ancient buildings or historical buildings' can be simplified), missing plural 'photos' and missing article 'a' before 'photo' if singular. Use plural 'photos' because 'them' refers to multiple buildings.

× But other than that normal buildings doesn't strike my attention much.

✓ But other than that, normal buildings don't strike my attention much.

Errors: subject-verb agreement—'buildings' (plural) requires 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Add a comma after 'that' for clarity.

× Yes, I would like to visit the new skyscraper located in the new capital of Egypt.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the new skyscraper located in the New Administrative Capital of Egypt.

This sentence is mostly correct. Suggested improvement: use the proper name 'New Administrative Capital' if intended, and capitalize as a proper noun. No tense change needed.

× I heard it's about it's the tallest buildings in the world in the world right now and I'm sure at night also it's a lighten up with lights and I'm sure it's mesmerizing.

✓ I heard it's currently one of the tallest buildings in the world, and I'm sure at night it lights up beautifully and looks mesmerizing.

Multiple errors: redundancy ('about it's' and repeating 'in the world'), incorrect singular/plural ('buildings' vs 'building'), awkward passive/phrase 'it's a lighten up with lights'. Correct structure: use 'it's one of the tallest buildings' or 'it's the tallest building' depending on fact. Use 'lights up' or 'is lit up' for correct verb forms and 'beautifully' or 'and looks mesmerizing' for clear description. Split into coordinated clauses with 'and'.