Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 内容直接、相关，但存在重复、语法和表达不够自然的问题。建议：1) 避免重复词（如“near near”）。2) 用更自然的句子开头并在必要时用连接词扩展细节，例如说明这些高楼的类型和你对它们的看法。3) 控制长度，不超过5句，句子要流畅。示例句式练习：用主句回答，再用一两句补充具体信息。

例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home because I live in the city center. For example, there are multiple office towers and shopping malls within a five-minute walk, which makes the area feel very busy and convenient.

提案: 回答简单且重复，语法和用词有错误（如“need”用法不当，主谓一致错误，动词不定式缺失）。建议：1) 用更自然的动词表达兴趣（like/enjoy rather than need）。2) 修正语法（主谓一致、动词形式）。3) 增加具体细节或举例，使用连接词让表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings because each place has unique architectural styles. For instance, I often take pictures of old brick houses and modern glass facades when I travel, as they reflect the local culture and history.

提案: 回答内容明确，但存在表达不准确和词汇使用问题（如“impartial halls”和“ancient artificial”用词错误），句子可更自然、具体。建议：1) 使用正确的建筑名词（e.g. 'Hall of Supreme Harmony'等）。2) 说明具体原因并用连接词扩展细节。3) 控制句子长度，避免不必要的重复。

例: Yes, I would like to visit the Forbidden City in Beijing because I love history and it dates back about 500 years. I especially want to see the Hall of Supreme Harmony and the imperial gardens, as they would give me a deeper understanding of China's royal past.

× I think every place have different buildings.

✓ I think every place has different buildings.

“every” 作限定词时，后接单数名词，谓语动词须用第三人称单数形式。原句主语是“every place”（单数），因此动词应为“has”。建议记住：every + 单数，动词用第三人称单数。

× So I enjoy take photos of buildings.

✓ So I enjoy taking photos of buildings.

动词“enjoy”后必须接动名词（-ing 形式），不能接动词原形。原句中应把“take”改为“taking”。建议背诵常见跟随动名词的动词（如 enjoy, avoid, suggest 等）。

× It has a 500 year history.

✓ It has a 500-year history.

当用数字 + 名词作复合形容词或时间长度修饰名词时，通常在数字与名词间加连字符以构成复合形容词（500-year history）。此外也可以写成“a history of 500 years”或“a 500-year-old history/structure”。建议在表示具体年数作定语时使用连字符或改写为介词短语。

× I would especially like to see the impartial halls and ancient artificial since they can help me learn more about China's past.

✓ I would especially like to see the imperial halls and ancient architecture since they can help me learn more about China's past.

原句中“impartial”意为“公正的”，与语境不符；应为“imperial”（皇家、宫廷的）以修饰“halls”。“ancient artificial”是不正确的短语，likely 指“ancient architecture”或“ancient artifacts”（古代建筑或文物）。根据上下文“halls”和“architecture/artefacts”更合适。建议检查词汇选择，注意近形词（impartial / imperial）和名词搭配（ancient + architecture/artifacts）。