Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、简洁并且注意语法和拼写错误。开头直接回答问题并给出一两句具体细节，避免重复和不必要的大写（如Staffs）。可改进发音/语法（例如：there is -> there are 或 there is a tall building; staff 不加复数s 作集合名词）。使用连接词让句子更连贯。

例: Yes, there is a tall department store near my house. I often go there to shop because it has a wide range of stores, including a supermarket and clothing shops, so it's very convenient.

提案: 回答时应使用正确时态和更自然的表达，避免语法错误和重复（如 “when I'm when I'm”）。说明原因时用清晰的句子并提供一点细节，用连接词衔接想法。不要用‘I don't’与前句冲突，要保持时态一致。

例: Not really. I don't enjoy taking photos of buildings when I travel; I prefer to admire the scenery with my own eyes and soak up the atmosphere, so I usually take only a few pictures.

提案: 回答要更具体并且语法准确。说“Beijing Province”不地道，应说 Beijing or a famous building in Beijing。列举时用合适的词（staff 不用于表示商品或店铺），并完整表达列举项。可加入原因或个人期待，使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, I'd like to visit a famous department store in Beijing because I've heard it's spectacular and offers a variety of shops, including fashion boutiques, food courts and restaurants, so it would be a great place to explore.

× Yes, there is a building near my house.

✓ Yes, there are buildings near my house.

原句用單數 'a building' 與後文複數描述（'many Staffs in the buildings'、之後提到複數建築）不一致。根據語境問題是問「有沒有高樓」，回答通常用複數 'buildings'。建議保持前後一致，如果只有一棟則所有後續句子也應改成單數；若有多棟則使用複數。

× There are many Staffs in the buildings.

✓ There are many staff in the building.

原句中 'Staffs' 不可數且不加複數-s，正確說法是 'staff' 表示員工整體。另外根據前句若為單一百貨公司，應用單數 'the building'；若前句為複數，則改為 'in the buildings' 並保持 'staff' 不變。中文建議：'staff' 通常當作不可數名詞，不要加 s。

× I often go to the buildings for buying.

✓ I often go to the building to shop.

原句 'for buying' 結構不自然，英文表達購物常用動詞 'shop' 或短語 'to buy things'。同時前面名詞數量應與上下文一致（building 或 buildings）。建議使用不定式 'to shop' 或 'to buy things'。

× No, I didn't because I'm not a photo hobby.

✓ No, I don't, because photography is not my hobby.

原句時態和詞類錯誤：'I didn't'（過去式）不合上下文，應使用一般現在 'I don't'；'I'm not a photo hobby' 把 hobby 當作人，應說 'photography is not my hobby' 或 'I'm not into photography'。中文建議：用現在時表示習慣性喜好，並把 hobby 作為名詞短語 'my hobby'。

× I didn't like to take photos when I'm when I'm traveling.

✓ I don't like to take photos when I'm traveling.

句中混用了過去式 'didn't like' 和現在進行 'I'm traveling'，時態不一致且有重複 'when I'm when I'm' 的錯誤。應統一用現在一般或現在進行表達習慣，並刪除重複。建議使用 'I don't like to take photos when I'm traveling' 或 'I don't like taking photos when I travel'。

× When I'm traveling I like to look at landscape by my eyes, but I don't.

✓ When I'm traveling, I like to look at the landscape with my own eyes, so I don't take photos.

原句 'look at landscape by my eyes' 用法不自然，應為 'look at the landscape with my eyes' 或更自然的 'with my own eyes'；結尾 'but I don't' 不完整，需說明不做何事，故補為 'so I don't take photos'。中文建議：使用 'with my own eyes' 表示親眼看，並完整表達不拍照的意思。

× Of course, I want to visit the department store at Beijing Province.

✓ Of course, I want to visit the department store in Beijing.

英語中地點用介詞通常是 'in Beijing' 而不是 'at Beijing Province'；另外 'Beijing' 本身是直轄市，不用 'Province'。中文建議：地點要用正確介詞並使用正確的地名形式。

× I heard it is very spectacular and there are many staff in the building, such as clothes, food, restaurant and.

✓ I heard it is very spectacular and there are many shops in the building, such as clothing stores, food outlets, and restaurants.

原句中 'many staff' 用法錯誤（staff 為不可數且表示員工，不適合列舉商店類別）；語尾列舉不完整 'and.'。應改為 'many shops' 並具體列出類別，用複數名詞如 'clothing stores, food outlets, and restaurants'。中文建議：把 'staff' 換成 'shops' 或 'stores'，並完整列出項目，句尾不要留下不完整的 'and'。