Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and give clear supporting details using linking words. Start with a direct topic sentence, fix grammar (remove doubled words, correct articles and sentence structure), and add one or two specific details (e.g., nearest town, distance) with a linking word like "because" or "so".

例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a suburban village. Instead, there are small houses tucked among large trees, so the area feels very peaceful and relaxing.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural, remove filler phrases), and organize reasons with linking words like "however" and "for example." Be specific about what kinds of buildings you photograph and how often.

例: Not really — I don’t usually take photos, but sometimes I photograph interesting architecture when I travel. For example, last year I took pictures of a modern museum façade to show my family.

提案: Give a direct answer, avoid filler words, correct tense and articles, and be specific about the building and reasons. Use linking words like "however" or "for example" and include one supporting detail (history, architecture, or personal reason).

例: I don’t have a single must-visit building, but I would love to see the Leaning Tower of Pisa in Italy because of its unique tilt and historical significance. For example, I’m fascinated by how engineers have preserved it for centuries.

提案: Answer directly, avoid repeating words, and add a brief specific reason with linking words such as "because" and "for example." Mention a concrete benefit (view, convenience) and one detail about city life you’d enjoy.

例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building in a big city because it offers beautiful views and easy access to restaurants and public transport. For example, I imagine enjoying evening skyline views from a high-floor balcony.

× There aren't any tall tall buildings near my home because I live in a suburban village.

✓ There aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in a suburban village.

Duplicate word 'tall' is a repetition error and not a pluralization issue; remove the extra 'tall' to make the sentence natural. Also 'aren't any tall buildings' correctly uses plural after 'any' so no change needed there.

× In there is a small houses in big trees which makes our tiny area very relaxing and peaceful.

✓ There are small houses among big trees, which makes our tiny area very relaxing and peaceful.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and mismatched number: 'In there is a small houses' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'houses' and misplaces 'in'. Use 'There are' for plural 'houses', use 'among' or 'amongst' to express being surrounded by trees, and add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause beginning with 'which'.

× I'm not a big fan of taking photos of anything so I guess I don't take photos of buildings, but sometimes there is a specific types of architecture that I want to capture for to show my family, to show my friends, so sometimes I do.

✓ I'm not a big fan of taking photos of anything, so I guess I don't take photos of buildings, but sometimes there are specific types of architecture that I want to capture to show my family and friends, so sometimes I do.

Several issues: 'there is' should be 'there are' to agree with plural 'types' (singular/plural issue). Remove the extra 'to' in 'for to show'; use 'to show' or 'for showing'. Combine 'my family, to show my friends' into 'my family and friends' for concision. Added commas for clarity.

× Uh, actually there is no any specific building that I'd like to visit, but when I have been in Italy, I really wanted to visit Pisa building.

✓ Uh, actually there isn't any specific building that I'd like to visit, but when I was in Italy, I really wanted to visit the Leaning Tower of Pisa.

Use 'isn't any' rather than 'is no any' (incorrect combination). For past context use 'was in Italy' rather than 'have been' when referring to a specific past visit. 'Pisa building' is not the correct name; use 'the Leaning Tower of Pisa' and include 'the' for a specific landmark (article use).

× It's a very popular destination for any tourists and very historical buildings, so I'd like to visit it.

✓ It's a very popular destination for tourists and a very historical building, so I'd like to visit it.

Mismatch between singular 'destination' and plural 'buildings'. 'Any tourists' is unnatural here; use 'tourists'. If referring to the Leaning Tower as one structure, use singular 'a very historical building'. Also keep article 'a' before 'very historical building'.

× Yes, absolutely. I would like to live in a tall building but in a big city because it would offer a beautiful view from the windows and I'd like to enjoy being close to urban urban atmosphere.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I would like to live in a tall building in a big city because it would offer beautiful views from the windows and I'd like to enjoy being close to the urban atmosphere.

Removed duplicated word 'urban' and adjusted 'a beautiful view' to 'beautiful views' which is more natural when referring to multiple windows; added 'the' before 'urban atmosphere' to indicate a specific concept. Note: duplication error and article/word choice improvements.