Building— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there tall buildings near your home?
受験者
Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. Because I live in the city, I can see numerous apartment blocks from my window, which makes the area feel very urban and modern.
試験官
Do you take photos of buildings?
受験者
I seldom take photos of buildings. I see buildings every day. I more prefer photographing natural landscapes, especially mountains and the sea. For example, when I travel, I usually stay spend more time shooting sunrise.
試験官
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
受験者
Yes, I would like to visit a local museum because I want to learn more about the city's history and the culture. For example, I'm especially interested in historical exhibits and artifacts that show how the city developed, so visiting a museum would help me understand local life.
試験官
Do you want to live in a tall building?
受験者
Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would allow me to enjoy a view of the city skyline and the surrounding scenery. For example, waking up to look at views of the river and distant hills will make the apartment feel more special.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there tall buildings near your home?
スコア: 82.0提案: 回答直接且内容相关，但句子衔接可改进，避免以Because开头的短句显得断裂。可以用更自然的衔接词并加入一两句具体细节（例如具体建筑类型或距离）使表达更丰富。注意控制在5句以内。
例: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. I live in the city, so I can see numerous apartment blocks from my window, which gives the area a very urban, modern feel. For example, there is a 20-storey residential tower about two blocks away that dominates the skyline.
Do you take photos of buildings?
スコア: 72.0提案: 内容清楚但有语法和表达错误（如“I more prefer”、“stay spend”），句子衔接可更自然。建议修正语法，使用连接词解释原因，并给出一两个具体例子（地点或拍摄习惯）。保持简洁，不超过5句。
例: I seldom take photos of buildings because I see them every day and they feel familiar. I prefer photographing natural landscapes, especially mountains and the sea. For example, when I travel I usually get up early to shoot the sunrise on the coastline, which I find more inspiring.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
スコア: 86.0提案: 回答明确且有具体原因与例子，结构良好。可进一步提高自然度和连贯性，使用更丰富的词汇（例如“exhibits”替换重复词）并可提到某个具体博物馆名称或一件感兴趣的展品以增强具体性。
例: Yes, I would like to visit the local history museum to learn more about the city's past and culture. I'm particularly interested in historical exhibits and artifacts that illustrate how the city developed, such as old maps or traditional tools used by early residents.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
スコア: 88.0提案: 回答自然且有具体想象，举例恰当。可以略微丰富细节（如哪层楼或哪类景观）並用连接词加强流畅度，仍保持句子简洁。避免重复“view”。
例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would give me beautiful views of the city skyline and the surrounding countryside. For example, living on a high floor overlooking the river and distant hills would make waking up each morning feel quite special.
文法
× I more prefer photographing natural landscapes, especially mountains and the sea.
✓ I prefer photographing natural landscapes, especially mountains and the sea.
句中使用了“more prefer”，不符合英语习惯。动词“prefer”本身已经表示偏好，后面直接接动名词或不定式即可；若要比较则用“prefer A to B”或“would rather”。建议去掉“more”。（应使用动名词时，保持“prefer + -ing”结构）
× For example, when I travel, I usually stay spend more time shooting sunrise.
✓ For example, when I travel, I usually spend more time shooting the sunrise.
原句“stay spend”包含多余动词，应选用一个动词。此处用“spend”表示花时间更合适；“shooting sunrise”前加定冠词“the sunrise”更符合表达习惯。句子应保持“spend + time + -ing”的结构。
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