Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct clear answer with a complete sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid short fragments and ambiguous phrasing.

例: Yes, there are a few tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a 20-storey apartment block and an office tower about ten minutes away by foot, which I can see from my balcony.

提案: Answer in one complete sentence stating whether you take photos, then explain why and give a brief example using a linking word (for example, because, so, when).

例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy architectural details; for example, I recently photographed the ornate façade of an old mosque near my university.

提案: Respond directly with a full sentence naming the building you want to visit or the area, then explain why with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid vague time words like 'tonight' if not appropriate.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the National Parliament House in Dhaka because I admire its unique design, and I am curious about its history and the way the surrounding landscape is arranged.

提案: Provide a clear yes/no answer in one sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, however, because, so). This makes your response coherent and informative.

例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would offer great city views and more natural light; however, I might be concerned about noise and elevator wait times.

× Your home? Yeah.

✓ You mean my home? Yes.

The student used 'Your home?' when responding about themselves; this is confusing pronoun use. Replace 'Your' with 'my' to refer to their own home. Also expand 'Yeah' to 'Yes' for clarity in a test context. Suggestion: listen to the question and use the correct pronoun referring to yourself or the examiner as appropriate.

× Those of buildings. I like it. Photos and buildings.

✓ Photos of buildings. I like them.

'Those of buildings' is ungrammatical pronoun and determiner use. The correct phrase is 'photos of buildings.' 'I like it' should agree in number with 'photos' so use 'I like them.' Avoid fragment 'Photos and buildings.' Combine into a clear sentence: 'I like photos of buildings.'

× I like building in busy regional Dhaka tonight, yeah.

✓ I would like to visit a building in busy, central Dhaka tonight.

The original has several issues: missing article before 'building' (use 'a building'), incorrect adjective order and choice ('regional' is unclear — likely 'central' or 'downtown'), and tense/modal mismatch for expressing desire to visit now ('I would like to visit' or 'I want to visit' fits better than 'I like building'). Also add a comma after 'busy' and replace 'yeah' with 'yes' for formality. Suggestion: use appropriate articles and verbs when expressing intentions.

× Hmm, I like it.

✓ Hmm, yes, I would like to live in a tall building.

The short response 'I like it' doesn't directly answer the question 'Do you want to live in a tall building?' It also lacks clarity about willingness. A full answer using modal 'would like' or 'want' better fits the question. Suggestion: respond with a complete sentence matching the question's structure, e.g., 'No, I wouldn't like to' or 'Yes, I would like to.'