Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、结构更清晰，避免语法错误与多余重复。可以先直接回答（短句），然后用一两句具体说明地点和楼层高度，并用连接词衔接。注意时态和定语从句的正确使用，例如改用“there aren’t any buildings taller than five storeys”这样的表达。

例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small city where most apartment blocks are no more than five storeys high, so the skyline is quite low and residential.

提案: 时态和时态一致性需要改进，并把回答组织为直接回答+补充说明。使用更恰当的词汇（landscapes, sky）并给出具体频率或场景以丰富内容。避免使用过去式描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时。

例: No, I don’t usually photograph buildings. I prefer natural landscapes, so I often take pictures of the sky and flowers when I go for walks in the park.

提案: 回答可以更简洁有力，先给出直接答案，然后用一到两句具体说明吸引你的地方（颜色、氛围、视野等），并用连接词连接观点，避免重复“I think”。提高词汇准确性（vibe可以用atmosphere or vibe，fascinating可加原因）。

例: Yes, I would love to visit Tokyo Tower. I’m drawn to its bright red-and-white colour and the lively atmosphere around it, and I imagine the views of the city from the observation deck would be spectacular.

提案: 结构较好，但有小语法错误和可提高的表达。把原因表达得更简洁并用连词加强逻辑（for this reason, so）。注意主语单复数（Taiwan experiences）。可补充具体细节如过去经历或具体担忧增强内容。

例: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building. Taiwan experiences frequent earthquakes, so I feel much safer in a single‑storey house where I would be closer to the ground and less anxious during tremors.

× No, because I'm living in a small city and all around my apartment that they're not over 5 levels.

✓ No, because I live in a small city and all the buildings around my apartment are not over five stories.

句子中使用了现在进行时 “I'm living” 和不自然的结构“that they're not over 5 levels”。一般事实或常态应使用一般现在时，因此将 “I'm living” 改为 “I live”。“all around my apartment that they're not over 5 levels” 结构不正确，应该用主谓结构表达："all the buildings around my apartment are not over five stories"。此外，“levels”在此可更自然地用“stories”。建议：描述常态时用一般现在时，主语和谓语要完整。

× So there's not any tall buildings around me.

✓ So there aren't any tall buildings around me.

句中有存在结构“there is/are”，后接可数名词复数时谓语应使用复数形式“are”，因此应改为 “there aren't”。建议：使用“there is/are”时，根据后面名词单复数选择“is”或“are”。

× No, I didn't take photos of buildings because I prefer natural landscape, so I often took skies and flowers.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings because I prefer natural landscapes, so I often take photos of the sky and flowers.

句子时态混用：开头使用一般过去时“didn't take”，但接着说的是习惯或喜好，应使用一般现在时，因此改为“don't take”。同样，“prefer natural landscape”应为复数“natural landscapes”或加定冠词，且“so I often took skies and flowers”中的“took”错误地用了过去时和不自然的搭配，应为“often take photos of the sky and flowers”。建议：谈论习惯或喜好用一般现在时，注意名词单复数及常用搭配（take photos of）。

× Yes, I think that is the Tokyo Tower that I really want to visit because I think it is really fascinating that the color and that vibe and city.

✓ Yes, I think Tokyo Tower is the building I really want to visit because I find its color, vibe, and the city really fascinating.

原句结构混乱，重复使用“that”且从句结构不清晰。应简化为主句加定语从句或使用名词短语来说明原因。将“I think that is the Tokyo Tower that I really want to visit” 改为 “I think Tokyo Tower is the building I really want to visit” 更自然。之后解释理由时，用“its color, vibe, and the city”并用“find ... fascinating”。建议：避免重复的连接词，使用清晰的主谓结构与并列名词短语。

× No, I don't want to live in a tall building because Taiwan experience frequent earthquake and I feel safer in a single story house.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because Taiwan experiences frequent earthquakes and I feel safer in a single-story house.

主语“Taiwan”是第三人称单数，谓语应为“experiences”而不是“experience”。“frequent earthquake”应使用复数形式“frequent earthquakes”。此外“single story”作形容词时通常连字符“single-story”。建议：主谓一致要注意国家或单数名词对应第三人称单数动词，名词复数和复合形容词使用恰当形式。

× Living closer to the ground would make me less anxious during earthquakes.

✓ Living closer to the ground would make me less anxious during earthquakes.

该句语法正确，无需修改。现在分词短语“Living closer to the ground”作为主语或状语使用恰当，表达清楚。保持原句。