Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更简洁且语法正确，注意主谓一致和冠词；先直接回答问题，再用一到两句具体细节支持。可改进发音（如 skyscraper）和词汇选择（beans 应为 bees 或 birds）。建议用连词如 “and” 或 “which” 使句子连贯。

例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a small village. My house is next to a pretty garden, and I grow a variety of flowers there, which attract bees and butterflies.

提案: 答案要先直接回应，避免语法错误（如 “I do not appreciate” 或 “I don’t appreciate architecture”），并提供清晰具体的例子。修正不通顺的短语，如 “sculpture wheels” 和 “when I say in” — 可能想说 “sculptures” 或 “when I stay in a place”。使用连接词 such as “but” 或 “instead” 提高连贯性。

例: No, I don’t usually photograph buildings because I’m not very interested in architecture. Instead, I prefer taking pictures of sculptures or street performers when I visit new places.

提案: 回答较好但注意时态和语法（例如 “would like to visit ancient buildings such as temples and monasteries” 和 “it makes me feel relaxed and fulfilled”）。可以加入具体例子或理由说明喜欢古建筑的细节，如建筑风格或历史背景，并用链接词如 “because” 和 “so” 增强逻辑。

例: I would like to visit ancient buildings such as temples and monasteries because I enjoy their peaceful atmosphere and historical architecture. Visiting places like the Shaolin Temple would help me relax and learn about traditional culture.

提案: 需要更清晰的结构：先直接回答，然后简要解释原因并给出具体经历支持。注意语法（如 “I’m afraid of heights” 和 “When I was six years old my parents took me to visit a skyscraper”），避免句子碎片，使用连词如 “so” 和 “which” 使表达流畅。

例: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because I’m afraid of heights. When I was six, my parents took me to a skyscraper and I felt so scared in the elevator that I started crying, so I prefer low-rise houses.

× No, there is not skyscrapers near my house because I live in a village.

✓ No, there are not skyscrapers near my house because I live in a village.

原句中主语是复数名词“skyscrapers”，谓语应使用复数形式“are”。“there is”用于单数或不可数名词，复数要用“there are”。建议记住固定表达“There is/There are”，并根据后面名词的单复数选用。

× My house near a beautiful and small garden.

✓ My house is near a beautiful small garden.

缺少系动词“is”来构成系表结构，且形容词顺序“beautiful small”更自然应为“beautiful small”或“small beautiful”（常见为“beautiful small garden”或更自然的“a small beautiful garden”），但更常见是“a beautiful small garden”。此处应补上动词并加不定冠词“a”。建议复习系动词与主语补语结构以及冠词用法。

× I plant a lot of various flower in it and it always attracts some beans and butterflies.

✓ I plant a lot of various flowers in it and it always attracts bees and butterflies.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”；“a lot of”后可接可数名词复数。原句“beans”应为“bees（蜜蜂）”，上下文与“butterflies”并列，意为“蜜蜂和蝴蝶”。建议注意可数名词单复数并检查错拼写。

× No, I don't take photos of buildings because I not appreciate of the architecture.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings because I don't appreciate the architecture.

原句缺少助动词否定形式“do not”在从句中；并且“appreciate of”搭配错误，动词“appreciate”不接介词“of”。应使用“don't appreciate the architecture”。建议注意否定句在一般现在时中每个含谓语的子句都需用助动词，并掌握动词固定搭配。

× I usually take photos for the sculpture wheels like volcano or some famous people like the superstar when I say in.

✓ I usually take photos of sculptures, monuments like volcano-shaped ones, or of famous people like superstars when I go there.

原句结构混乱，介词使用不当（应为“photos of”而非“photos for”），名词短语“sculpture wheels like volcano”不清晰，且“when I say in”不符合语法和语义，疑为“when I stay in/when I see them/when I go there”的拼写错误。根据上下文，改为“photos of sculptures, monuments like volcano-shaped ones, or of famous people like superstars when I go there”。建议理清并分列并列项，使用正确介词并修正拼写错误。

× Well, I would like to visit some ancient building like temples and monasteries because I enjoy the silent atmosphere and it will made me feel relaxed and fulfilling.

✓ Well, I would like to visit some ancient buildings like temples and monasteries because I enjoy the silent atmosphere and it will make me feel relaxed and fulfilled.

“some ancient building”中的“building”应为复数“buildings”，以与“some”以及后面的并列项一致。动词短语“will made”时态错误，应为将来时“will make”。“fulfilling”用于主语感受时通常用“fulfilled”表示感到满足。建议注意数量词与名词一致、将来时助动词后接动词原形、以及形容词/分词选择。

× No, I don't want to live in a high building because I afraid the high space.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a high building because I'm afraid of high places.

“I afraid”缺少系动词和介词，应为“I am afraid of ...”。“the high space”表达不自然，应改为复数短语“high places”表示高处。建议复习形容词“afraid”与介词“of”的搭配并注意名词的自然表达。

× When I six years old, my parents brought me to visit the Skype scraping.

✓ When I was six years old, my parents took me to visit the skyscraper.

缺少过去时系动词“was”来表年龄的过去状态（When I was six years old）。“brought me to visit”在口语可接受，但更常用“took me to visit”。“Skype scraping”是拼写和词序错误，应为“skyscraper”。建议注意表达年龄的固定句型并检查单词拼写。

× When I entered the elevator. I'm so scared that kept crying.

✓ When I entered the elevator, I was so scared that I kept crying.

原文把完整句分为两个片段并缺少连词，且时态不一致：描述过去的经历应使用过去时“was”及“kept crying”。“I'm”应为过去时“I was”。建议将句子合并并保持时态一致，使用适当的从句连接。