Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy and use clearer, more natural phrasing. Start with a concise topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail. Correct plural/singular errors and use articles and prepositions properly. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. Most buildings are only two or three storeys high, such as small offices and residential blocks.

提案: Make the response more natural and grammatical: use correct verb forms and noun phrases, and link ideas with a simple connector. Give one clear example and a reason why you prefer looking to photographing.

例: I don't usually photograph buildings; instead, I like to admire their architecture and decoration. For instance, I often visit the nearby museum because I enjoy its ornate façade.

提案: Be more specific and correct grammar (articles, verb forms). Add one or two concrete details about what interests you and why. Use linking words if adding reasons.

例: Yes – I would like to visit the central Jakarta museum near my home because it houses traditional artifacts from the medieval era. I am especially interested in its collection of textiles and ceremonial objects.

提案: Clarify your reason and correct vocabulary: say 'I am afraid of heights' instead of 'fear about The Hague'. Use clearer contrasts and give a specific preference. Keep it to two sentences.

例: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights. I prefer a low-rise home, such as a two-storey house in a quieter neighbourhood.

× No, there are no tall building near my home.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my home.

The noun 'building' should be plural because 'there are no' requires a plural noun when referring to multiple items; change 'building' to 'buildings'. Use 'there are no tall buildings' for grammatical agreement.

× It's just an ordinary building with two floor.

✓ It's just an ordinary building with two floors.

When indicating quantity for countable nouns, use the plural form 'floors'. Also include the plural marker '-s' to match 'two'.

× For example an office or a mess with two or three floor.

✓ For example, an office or a mess with two or three floors.

The noun 'floor' must be plural ('floors') after 'two or three'. Also add a comma after 'For example' for clarity (punctuation adjustment does not change grammar category).

× I'm not always taking a photo of building, instead I just enjoy the decoration or the architect of that's building.

✓ I don't always take photos of buildings; instead I just enjoy the decoration or the architecture of the building.

Use simple present 'don't always take' rather than present continuous 'I'm not always taking' for habitual actions. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' when speaking generally. Use 'buildings' plural to match general reference. 'Architect' is a person; the correct noun for design is 'architecture'. 'That's building' is incorrect; use 'the building'.

× For example, I enjoy a monument and museum near my house.

✓ For example, I enjoy the monument and the museum near my house.

When referring to specific nearby places, use the definite article 'the'. Also include 'the' before both nouns for parallel structure. If speaking generally, use plurals: 'monuments and museums'.

× Yes, there is a building I would like to visit.

✓ Yes, there is a building I would like to visit.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable as written: 'There is a building I would like to visit' correctly uses 'there is' for a singular item. No change required.

× It's a museum in the central of Jakarta that provide a traditional and monumental things from the medieval era.

✓ It's a museum in central Jakarta that provides traditional and monumental items from the medieval era.

Use 'in central Jakarta' rather than 'in the central of Jakarta'. The verb must agree: 'provides' (singular subject 'museum'). Use 'items' instead of 'things' for formality and clarity. 'Traditional and monumental' modifies 'items'. Also 'medieval era' is correct as a phrase; no article needed.

× I don't want to live in a tall building or in a skyscraper building.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building or in a skyscraper.

Redundant noun 'building' after 'skyscraper' is unnecessary because 'skyscraper' already implies a building. The rest of the sentence uses the correct modal 'don't want'.

× The main reason is I am fear about The Hague.

✓ The main reason is I am afraid of heights.

'I am fear about' is incorrect: use the adjective 'afraid' with preposition 'of' to express fear. 'The Hague' is a specific city and capitalization is correct, but context suggests the speaker means 'heights' (fear of tall places) rather than the city 'The Hague'. If the speaker meant the city, use 'afraid of The Hague' but that is unlikely here.

× Instead I prefer to live in the North High building for example two floor building.

✓ Instead, I prefer to live in the North High building; for example, a two-floor building.

'Two floor building' needs hyphenation or phrasing 'two-floor building' or 'a two-floor building'. Use 'a' before singular noun 'two-floor building'. Adding commas improves clarity. Ensure agreement by making 'floor' plural when quantified.