Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然流畅，避免断句过多和重复信息。开头直接回答后用一到两句补充细节（例如用途、外观或对生活的影响），并使用连接词保持连贯。注意语法（如时态和冠词）和词汇多样性。

例: Yes, there are. In fact, a tall mixed-use building stands right in front of my apartment; it was completed three years ago and houses shops, offices and apartments, which has made the neighbourhood much busier.

提案: 回答可以更简洁并注意主谓一致与词形（例如 'enjoys' 应为 'enjoy' 或改为形容词短语）。用一到两条具体例子说明你拍摄建筑的类型和目的，并用连接词增强逻辑。

例: Yes, I do. When I travel I love photographing interesting buildings, especially historic sites and striking modern designs, because they capture local culture and make great souvenirs.

提案: 回答需更自然地开头（例如直接说 'Yes, I would' 或 'Yes, there is'），避免冗长的短语重复，用更准确的形容词搭配并注意语法（例如 'the beautiful' 不应单独使用）。给出为什么想去（例如观景、拍照或体验活动）的具体理由。

例: Yes, there is — I would love to visit the Canton Tower in Guangzhou because it’s an iconic landmark with great panoramic views, interesting architecture and an observation deck where I could take photos of the city.

提案: 回答可以更简洁并给出具体原因，使用连接词使语句连贯（例如 'because'）。提供一两点具体比较（比如安静、空间或花园）会更有说服力。注意定冠词和形容词搭配（例如 'a house that is large and far from the city'）。

例: No, I wouldn’t. I prefer living in a large house outside the city because it’s quieter, offers more outdoor space and feels more relaxed than apartment living in a tall building.

× Yes, there are. Actually. There is a tall building just in front of my apartment.

✓ Yes, there is. Actually, there is a tall building just in front of my apartment.

使用“There is/are”时，主语与动词需一致。这里指代单数的“a tall building”，因此应使用“there is”。此外“Actually.”应与句子连贯为“Actually, there is ...”。（建议：根据后文名词的单复数选择there is或there are，并使用逗号连接短语。）

× This is a new building which was built three years ago and this building is used for several purposes.

✓ This is a new building which was built three years ago and is used for several purposes.

句子重复使用主语“this building”，造成冗余。可将第二个从句省略主语，使用并列谓语“and is used”。（建议：避免不必要的主语重复，使用并列结构。）

× When I travel, one of my favorite activities is taking photos of different sceneries.

✓ When I travel, one of my favorite activities is taking photos of different scenes.

英语中“scenery”通常为不可数名词，不用复数形式；用复数时更常用“scenes”。（建议：将不可数名词改为可数复数或用单数不可数形式。）

× When I run into some buildings that are unique, attractive, and enjoys long history, I often take out my phone to photograph.

✓ When I come across some buildings that are unique, attractive, and have a long history, I often take out my phone to photograph them.

原句中“enjoys”与其修饰的复数“buildings”主语不一致，应使用“have”。“run into”在此语境更自然的表达是“come across”。另外“photograph”及其宾语需完整，补上“them”。（建议：注意主谓一致，选择更自然的动词短语，并补全宾语。）

× Yes, it is. One of the buildings that I want to visit the most is the Canton Tower, located in Guangdong province.

✓ Yes. One of the buildings that I want to visit the most is the Canton Tower, located in Guangdong province.

回答“Yes, it is.”用于回答关于物件存在或描述的Yes/No问句，但问题是“Is there a building that you would like to visit?” 更自然的简短回答为“Yes.”或“There is.”这里不应用“it”。（建议：简短回答用“Yes.”或用完整句“There is a building I would like to visit.”）

× It's the landmark of Guangzhou and it is unique, attractive and the beautiful.

✓ It's the landmark of Guangzhou and it is unique, attractive and beautiful.

形容词列表中不需在“beautiful”前加定冠词“the”。“the beautiful”在此位置语法错误。应并列形容词形式。（建议：并列形容词直接使用，不加“the”。）

× I have always been looking forward to visit.

✓ I have always been looking forward to visiting.

短语“look forward to”后接动名词（-ing），不能接不定式“to visit”。（建议：使用动名词形式，如“looking forward to visiting”或更完整“looking forward to seeing/visiting it”。）

× No, I don't. I don't think I want to live in a tall building. I prefer living in a house which is very large and far away from the city.

✓ No, I don't. I don't think I want to live in a tall building. I prefer living in a house that is very large and far away from the city.

在限定性定语从句中，用“that”比“which”更常见且更自然（尤其在口语和美式英语中）。这里用“that”更合适。（建议：在限定性从句使用“that”以更自然地表达。）