Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 在回答时要更直接、语法准确且信息清晰。注意主谓一致（one → is）、定冠词和复数形式，去掉不必要的重复，提供一两条具体细节如用途或位置以丰富内容。可以用一到两句话完成回答，保持自然流利。

例: Yes, there is one tall building near my home. It is an office tower used by a technology company and stands about five minutes' walk from my apartment.

提案: 回答内容较好，但需简洁并注意时态和单复数（sunset → sunsets），减少犹豫词。使用连接词使句子更连贯，并给出具体例子（如拍摄角度或用途）。控制在最多五句内。

例: Yes, I often photograph buildings near my house at sunset because the warm light creates beautiful silhouettes. I usually focus on the skyline and reflections in windows, and I keep the best shots in an album to preserve those memories.

提案: 回答需要更自然的表达和更准确的短语（in French → in France；have heard a lot of story → have heard many stories；haven't see → haven't seen）。可简要说明原因和期望经历（例如观景台或餐厅）。保持句子简洁且连贯。

例: I would love to visit the Eiffel Tower in France because I have heard many fascinating stories about its history. I haven't seen it in person yet, and I'm especially interested in going to one of the restaurants there to enjoy the view and try French cuisine.

提案: 表达不清且句子未完成。要直接回答（Yes/No），并给出两三个清晰的理由，避免重复和语填词，注意句子完整性和逻辑连接。可提到具体不便之处和个人偏好。

例: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I find them crowded and I worry about problems like elevator failures, and I prefer a low-rise home with a nice view of the sunset and easier access to the outdoors.

× Yes, there are only one tall building near my home which is a UH which is viewed by a company and using for their office.

✓ Yes, there is only one tall building near my home which is a UH that is owned by a company and used for their office.

问题类型：单复数与主谓一致。说明：原句中使用了 there are 与 one（单数）不一致，应该用 there is。其次，原句中动词短语“viewed by a company and using for their office”语法错误，应为“owned by a company and used for their office”（被公司拥有并供其办公使用）。建议：当主体是单数时用 there is；被动结构中两个动作应都用过去分词形式保持并列一致。

× Yes, I always take photos of buildings near my house when the sunset, which create a beautiful landscape and it's quite meaningful to put those pictures in my photo, uh, photograph, and it can give me more memories.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of the buildings near my house at sunset, which create a beautiful scene, and it's quite meaningful to put those pictures in my photo collection; they can give me more memories.

问题类型：动词+ing 和时间介词使用。说明：1) “when the sunset” 用法不当，应使用介词短语 at sunset。2) 从句“which create a beautiful landscape”中，先行词是复数“photos”或“the buildings”，若指 buildings 用 create 正确；同时 landscape 更常用 scene。3) “put those pictures in my photo, uh, photograph” 不自然，应为 put them in my photo collection。4) 最后用复数代词 they 对应前文的 pictures。建议：使用正确时间介词（at sunset），确保代词与先行词数一致，使用常用搭配（photo collection, scene）。

× The building that I like to visit is the Eiffel Tower in French. I have heard a lot of story about it, but I haven't, uh, see it, uh, by my eyes. And I heard there are many restaurants in the Eiffel Tower which I really interested in to try their food.

✓ The building I would like to visit is the Eiffel Tower in France. I have heard a lot of stories about it, but I haven't seen it with my own eyes. And I heard there are many restaurants in the Eiffel Tower, which I am really interested in trying.

问题类型：现在时态与动词形式错误。说明：1) 地名应为 in France 而不是 in French（French 是语言/形容词）。2) 现在完成时后接动词应使用过去分词 seen，而不是 see。3) “by my eyes” 用法不正确，应为 with my own eyes。4) “stories” 应为复数。5) “I really interested in to try” 结构错误，正确应为 I am really interested in trying 或 I am really interested in trying their food。建议：注意国家/语言的词性区别，完成时使用过去分词，固定搭配用法（with my own eyes; interested in + -ing）。

× Actually no uh tall building is too crowded for my living, uh, living view and even I have a better landscape on sunset, but it will be very inconvenient when the elevator broke, so I prefer to live in.

✓ Actually no. Tall buildings are too crowded for me to live in; even if they have a better view at sunset, it would be very inconvenient if the elevator broke, so I prefer not to live in one.

问题类型：现在时态与句子结构错误。说明：1) 原句主语与谓语不合，需把观点表述为 general statement：Tall buildings are too crowded for me to live in。2) “living view” 不自然，应为 view / better view。3) “on sunset” 应为 at sunset。4) 条件句中应使用虚拟或假设结构 if the elevator broke 或 if the elevator were to break；与现在态时态一致，这里用 would be ... if ... broke 更自然。5) 句子未完成（so I prefer to live in.）缺少宾语，应为 prefer not to live in one。建议：使用标准表达“too ... for somebody to do something”，“better view at sunset”，完成条件句并补全宾语。