Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且相关，但有语法和表达不够自然之处，且句子略重复。可以用更地道的词汇和更简洁的句子结构，并用一两处细节丰富内容。注意冠词和复数形式（例如：‘most are high-rise apartment blocks’）。

例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home, mostly high-rise apartment blocks. They dominate the skyline in my neighborhood and you can see them from the main road.

提案: 内容表达清楚但存在语法错误和时态不一致（例如：‘especially when a building has’；‘I don’t like taking photos of every building’）。可以加入衔接词并给出具体例子说明你会拍什么样的建筑。

例: Sometimes I do, especially when a building has a unique architectural style or an interesting history. For example, I often photograph old churches and refurbished factories because their details and textures make great pictures.

提案: 回答明确并有原因，但句子有小错误（例如：‘tell a lot of stories’ 或 ‘tell many stories’）。可以更具体说明你想去的某座建筑或博物馆并说明原因，使答案更具体有说服力。

例: I'd love to visit historical buildings and museums, especially the old city hall, because they tell many stories about the city's past and show how local people used to live.

提案: 句子有明显语法错误和词序问题（应为‘I don't want to live in a tall building’ 或 ‘I don't live in a tall building’；‘I recently bought an apartment in a high-rise building’）。另外前后信息有矛盾：先说不想住高楼，但又说已买高楼公寓。请在答案中逻辑一致并补充理由。

例: I used to be unsure about living in a tall building, but I now live in a high-rise apartment that I recently bought. I enjoy the views and the convenience of city living, though sometimes I miss having a garden.

× Yes, there are a few tall buildings near my home, most high rise apartment blocks.

✓ Yes, there are a few tall buildings near my home, mostly high-rise apartment blocks.

句中“most high rise apartment blocks”不符合名词短语搭配。应使用副词“mostly”修饰后面的名词短语，且“high-rise”作复合形容词需用连字符。将“most”改为“mostly”，并在“high-rise”之间加连字符可使表达更自然、语法正确。

× Sometimes I do, especially the building has a unique architectural style or a strong sense of history.

✓ Sometimes I do, especially when the building has a unique architectural style or a strong sense of history.

原句缺少连接词引导时间状语从句，直接连接会造成句子结构不完整。应在“especially”后加“when”引导从句，使主句与从句衔接自然。此错误归类为现在分词/现在分词形式相关的从句连接问题，需用连词引导正确的从句结构。

× But I didn't like take photos of every building.

✓ But I don't like taking photos of every building.

“like”后跟动名词或不定式，但在一般现在时表示习惯时更常用动名词形式。原句使用了过去式“didn't like”与后接动词原形“take”，且与上下文时态不一致。根据上下文应为一般现在时的习惯，改为“don't like taking”。

× I'd love to visit some historical buildings or museums because they usually tell a lot of story about the city's history and culture.

✓ I'd love to visit some historical buildings or museums because they usually tell a lot of stories about the city's history and culture.

短语“a lot of story”是不正确的搭配，应为复数“a lot of stories”或不可数形式“a lot about the city's history”。此处使用“stories”更符合语义。该问题属于现在时/名词搭配问题，需注意不可数与可数名词的使用。

× I don't living a tall building.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building.

原句“don't living”是错误的动词形式；助动词“do”后应使用动词原形“live”。此外，缺少动词“want”以表达意愿，并且表示在某类建筑里居住通常用介词“in”。因此改为“I don't want to live in a tall building.” 这是代词/动词搭配与动词形式的错误，需用正确助动词结构和介词。

× I recently bought apartment in the high rise and I enjoy the whole view which makes city living much more comfortable.

✓ I recently bought an apartment in the high-rise, and I enjoy the whole view which makes city living much more comfortable.

“bought apartment”缺少不定冠词“an”；“high rise”作复合形容词应写“high-rise”；在并列句中逗号和连词更清晰。此外也可在“the whole view”前保留定冠词，但关键是添加冠词和连字符。此问题属于冠词使用错误，应注意可数名词前的冠词。