Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子结构不够自然，有语法错误和冗长成分。建议使用一个主题句直接回答，然后用1-2个简洁的细节支持。注意复数形式（buildings）、冠词（an office building/office buildings）、词序和去掉多余词汇。可以使用连接词如 "so" 或 "which" 来使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in a big city. For example, there are numerous office towers and apartment blocks, which make the area feel busy and modern.

提案: 总体表达较好，但第一句有语法错误和不自然的用法（'a big fan of take photos' 应为 'a big fan of taking photos'）。可以把观点与原因紧密结合，并用连词如 'because' 或 'so' 来连接句子。同时保持简洁，不超过5句。

例: Yes, I'm a big fan of taking photos of buildings. When I visit a new city, I usually photograph unique and modern structures because it helps me relax and remember the trip.

提案: 回答包含要点但有语法与用词错误（'the also is very famous places' 不通顺，'places' 应为 'place'，应注意冠词和时态）。建议先给出主题句，然后提供1-2个具体细节，比如历史、建筑风格或原因。使用连接词如 'because' 或 'since'。

例: Yes, I would like to visit Jing'an Temple. I have seen many photos online and it looks beautiful; I especially want to see its historic architecture because it is a famous place with a long history.

提案: 内容清楚但句子稍长且有语法问题（复数/单数、词序、冗余 'it'）。建议先给出直接回答，然后用1-2个并列理由，每个理由用简短句子或用连词分开，注意名词单复数和冠词。

例: Yes, I would. Living in a tall building is convenient because there are often subway stations and shopping malls nearby. It also offers great views of the city.

× Yes they are because I live in a big city and there are a lot of office and apartments building and this may cause the area feel busy and modern.

✓ Yes, there are, because I live in a big city and there are a lot of offices and apartment buildings, and this may cause the area to feel busy and modern.

问题类型：名词单复数和短语搭配错误。解释：原句中“office and apartments building”混用了单复数并且结构不正确，正确说法应为“offices and apartment buildings”。另外“cause the area feel” 缺少不定式“to”，应为“cause the area to feel”。建议：把名词改为复数并保持一致，把不定式补上。

× Yes, I'm a big fan of take photos of building. When I travel to a new city, I often take pictures of unique and modern buildings. I think it's a good way to relieve my stress.

✓ Yes, I'm a big fan of taking photos of buildings. When I travel to a new city, I often take pictures of unique and modern buildings. I think it's a good way to relieve my stress.

问题类型：动词+ing形式及名词单复数。解释：短语“a fan of”后面应接动名词，因此应为“taking”。“building”在泛指多个建筑物时应使用复数“buildings”。建议：使用“taking photos of buildings”。

× Yes, I would like to visit Jingan temple. I have seen many pictures of it online. It's really beautiful and the also is very famous places with a long history.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Jing'an Temple. I have seen many pictures of it online. It's really beautiful, and it is also a very famous place with a long history.

问题类型：句子结构与代词/数的一致性错误。解释：原句“the also is very famous places”结构混乱，'the'多余，'also'位置不当，且“places”与前面的单数指代不一致，应为单数“place”。建议：去掉多余的定冠词，调整词序为“it is also a very famous place”。注意专有名词大小写和标点。

× Yes I do. Living in a tall building is really convenient because it has all kinds of transport facility like subway station and shopping malls and also it has a great views of the city it.

✓ Yes, I do. Living in a tall building is really convenient because it has all kinds of transport facilities like subway stations and shopping malls, and it also has great views of the city.

问题类型：代词和名词单复数错误及重复代词。解释：原句中“transport facility”和“subway station”在泛指时应使用复数“transport facilities”“subway stations”。“a great views”中冠词与复数不匹配，应去掉“a”。句尾多余的代词“it”应删除。建议：将可数名词改为复数，去掉多余冠词和重复代词，并在“also”前后调整为“and it also has”。