Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意语法与连贯性。开头用主题句直接回应问题，然后用一到两句补充细节，避免重复和口头填充词（如"you know"）。注意时态和小品词（例如"travel"而不是"travelling"在此句子中应使用动词形式，或改为"I'm always travelling with my mom"）。可以用连接词（because, so）使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. Because I usually travel with my mother, she doesn't allow me to play on the bus, so I spend the time watching the scenery to relax.

提案: 回答较好，但需要更自然的表达与更准确的语法。避免口头语（如"uh"），并把专业表述改为更自然的短语，例如"I study environmental design"或"I'm majoring in environmental design"。将原因和结果逻辑连接清楚，如用"so"或"which"引导结果。

例: Yes, I often take photos because I'm majoring in environmental design. These photos give me ideas and inspiration for my projects, so they are very useful for my coursework.

提案: 回答表达了个人喜好，但有些口语化且语法不够准确。建议开门见山说出偏好，然后用一到两句具体原因支持观点。避免俚语（如"super stoked"）在正式考试中用较中性的词汇。注意从句的时态和连贯性。

例: I prefer the sea because I live in Wuhan, which is inland, so I rarely have the chance to visit coastal areas. If I ever get the opportunity, I would be very excited to see the sea and enjoy the beaches.

× Yes, I do, because you know, I always travelling with my mom and she just didn't allow me to play for on the bus, so I just can't watch the scenery out of the window.

✓ Yes, I do, because you know, I'm always travelling with my mom and she just doesn't allow me to play on the bus, so I can't watch the scenery out of the window.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式 和 第三人称单数。说明：原句中“I always travelling”缺少助动词形成进行时，应为“I am always travelling”。此外主句中“she just didn't allow me”与一般现在习惯性描述不一致，应使用一般现在时“she just doesn't allow me”。另外“play for on the bus”为多余或词序错误，改为“play on the bus”。建议：把表示现在习惯或经常发生的动作用一般现在时（或现在进行表示常态变化时加be动词+ -ing），并注意主语为第三人称单数时谓语要加-s/doesn't。

× Yes I do because I'm specializing in environmental design. Taking photo paves the way for help me, uh, design and give me inspiration.

✓ Yes, I do because I'm specializing in environmental design. Taking photos paves the way to help me design and gives me inspiration.

错误类型：过去分词/动词形式及主谓一致。说明：1) “Taking photo”中的名词应为复数“photos”或使用不可数形式，但此处复数更自然。2) “paves the way for help me”结构不正确，常用结构是 “pave the way to do something”或“pave the way for something”，因此改为“paves the way to help me design”。3) “design and give me inspiration”中“gives”应与主语“Taking photos”一致，使用第三人称单数形式“gives”。建议：注意不定式和介词短语的固定搭配，注意动名词作为主语时谓语动词的人称和数的一致性。

× I feel like I prefer the sea because you know, I live in Wuhan which is a city in the middle, so I almost don't get the chance to see the beautiful sea. If I have a chance, I would be super stoked to see the sea.

✓ I feel like I prefer the sea because, you know, I live in Wuhan, which is a city in the interior, so I almost never get the chance to see the beautiful sea. If I have a chance, I will be super stoked to see the sea.

错误类型：现在时态使用和情态动词。说明：1) “I almost don't get the chance”用法不自然，习惯表达为“I almost never get the chance”。2) 条件句“If I have a chance, I would be...”中使用真实将来条件时应使用“will”而不是“would”，因为这里是假定将来可能发生的情况。建议：注意频率副词位置（never 通常放在实义动词之前），以及第一类条件句中主句使用 will 表示真实可能的将来结果。