Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更简洁流畅并注意语法与单复数。先给出明确主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持，使用连接词减少停顿词（如 uh, umm）。例如把“it also have the different emotion on the scenery”改为更自然的表达并修正动词形式。

例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when travelling because I enjoy seeing changing landscapes. For example, I like watching mountains and trains pass by, which often changes the mood of the journey and makes it more relaxing.

提案: 注意句子结构和词序，使用更自然的短语如 “most of the time” 和“I dislike taking photos”。可以先给出直接回答，再用一两句理由支持，并用连接词使逻辑清晰。

例: Most of the time I don't take photos from a moving car because it's hard to capture clear details. So I prefer to stop the car and take pictures when the view is worth photographing.

提案: 回答要更自然并注意动词时态与词形（例如 change 'can found' 为 'can find'）。先给出明确偏好，再用具体细节支持，可以加入一两个连接词让句子更连贯。

例: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful surroundings. For example, walking in forests and beside rivers often lets me spot interesting plants and animals, which I find very relaxing.

× I enjoy the scenery outside the window because I can watch the mountains and trains in different places and it also have the different umm, emotion on the scenery and I enjoy that.

✓ I enjoy the scenery outside the window because I can watch the mountains and trains in different places, and it also has different moods, so I enjoy that.

错误类型：现在分词/动词形式问题（近似于动词形式或主谓一致）。句中“have”与主语“it”在现在时第三人称单数不一致，应使用“has”。同时“the different umm, emotion on the scenery”措辞不自然，改为“different moods”更地道。建议：注意主语与动词的数一致（第三人称单数用动词+s），并用更自然的名词短语表达情绪变化。

× Most of time I dislike take photos when I sit in the car. I think it's difficult to capture the specific details for the scenery, so I prefer to stop.

✓ Most of the time I dislike taking photos when I sit in the car. I think it's difficult to capture the specific details of the scenery, so I prefer to stop and get out.

错误类型：动词+ -ing形式 以及 介词使用。短语“dislike take photos”中动词不定式应改为动名词“taking”。另外“capture the specific details for the scenery”介词用法不当，应为“details of the scenery”。建议：在动词后跟动作时若表示通常不喜欢某事，用动名词；注意常用介词搭配（details of）。

× Well, I prefer the mountains because in the mountains I can breathe the fresh air in the forest and the river around me, and I also can found many interesting things and animals in the forest.

✓ Well, I prefer the mountains because in the mountains I can breathe the fresh air from the forest and the river around me, and I can also find many interesting things and animals in the forest.

错误类型：现在时/动词形式问题。句中“can found”时态错误，应为“can find”（情态动词后动词用原形）。另外“breathe the fresh air in the forest and the river around me”措辞不佳，改为“fresh air from the forest and the river”更自然。建议：情态动词后使用动词原形；注意介词短语的自然搭配。