Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且相关，但可以更简洁并加一点具体细节以增强内容深度。注意句子长度不要超过五句，使用衔接词使表达更连贯。可以加入具体例子说明你如何观察（比如注意建筑风格或街道活动）。

例: Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because it’s a pleasant way to learn about a city. For example, I often notice different architectural styles and busy street markets, which tell me a lot about local life. This helps me understand the city’s atmosphere and layout better.

提案: 回答直接但语法和表达可改进，注意动词形式和连贯性。可用一到两句补充原因并举例说明何时会拍照，使用连接词（for example, because, so）使结构更清晰。

例: No, I hardly ever take photos because I prefer to watch with my own eyes and absorb the moment. For example, when I travel through old neighbourhoods I keep my camera away so I can remember the colours and sounds more vividly.

提案: 回答表达清楚但有口语冗余和小错误（如“down to earth”用法不太合适）。建议用更恰当的形容词并补充具体细节说明为什么喜欢山（如空气、徒步、景色），使用连接词提高连贯性。

例: I prefer the mountains recently because they offer a peaceful atmosphere and fresh air. I enjoy hiking on quiet trails and the breathtaking views from the peaks, which help me relax and feel refreshed.

× I prefer watch with my own eyes because I think it helps me remember and feel the moment better.

✓ I prefer to watch with my own eyes because I think it helps me remember and feel the moment better.

问题类型：动词后接不定式或动名词的用法错误（Verb + -ing form）。句中动词 prefer 通常后接不定式（to do）或动名词（doing），但在表达喜好时更常见和自然的是 prefer to do。在此句中原文使用了不带 to 的动词原形 watch，造成不符合习惯用法。建议：将 watch 改为 to watch，完整为 “prefer to watch”。

× Recently I have become more attracted to the mountains because I just love the feeling of peace and down to earth and the views are really breathtaking.

✓ Recently I have become more attracted to the mountains because I just love the feeling of peace and being down to earth, and the views are really breathtaking.

问题类型：形容词或副词使用不当（Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs）。原句中短语 “down to earth” 是形容词短语，不能直接并列在名词短语中表示“感觉”（the feeling of ... and ...）。应使用动名词结构如 “being down to earth” 或者改写为两个并列的名词短语。此处将其改为 “the feeling of peace and being down to earth” 更符合语法和语义。建议：用动名词（being）把形容词短语变为名词性质，或重构句子以确保并列项语法一致。