Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子有重复和语法错误，表达也不够精炼。回答应先给出直接回答（肯定或否定），随后用一两句具体原因或例子补充。注意避免重复单词（如“car car”）和时态、搭配错误（如“weather is not very well”应为“the weather isn’t very good”）。建议练习简短、连贯的句子，并使用连接词（例如“but”或“so”）自然衔接。

例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car, because I enjoy watching the changing scenery. However, if the weather is bad or I’m very tired, I often prefer to sleep to rest for the journey.

提案: 表达不够自然且有搭配错误（如“taking photo”应为“taking photos”或“a photo”，“I am fantastic about the sky”不符合习惯用法）。回答应更具体说明何时拍照、用什么设备或举例，并使用连接词改善逻辑。注意词汇搭配（e.g., “fascinated by the sky”）。

例: Yes, I often take photos from the car window, especially when the landscape is dramatic, such as a striking skyline at sunset. I usually use my phone to capture the colours because those moments are easy to miss.

提案: 回答混乱，有多处词汇和语法错误（如“perform the mountains”“climbing climbing”“keep healthy the sun when I ho no”以及句子未完成）。建议先直接表明偏好，随后用一两句具体理由支持，并注意句子完整性与连贯性。可用比较结构或原因词（because, so, therefore）来组织答案。

例: I prefer the sea now. When I was younger I liked mountains because I enjoyed climbing and staying active, but nowadays I find the sound of waves and the fresh sea breeze much more relaxing, so I choose the seaside for holidays.

× Normally when traveling by bus or car car I look out the window at the scenery, but when the weather is not very well, I prefer to sleep.

✓ Normally when traveling by bus or car I look out the window at the scenery, but when the weather is not very good, I prefer to sleep.

问题类型：单复数和词形错误。原句有“car car”重复，应删去重复词。短语“not very well”用于副词描述动作，而此处需要形容词描述“weather”，应改为“not very good”。建议：去掉重复单词，用形容词修饰名词（the weather is not very good）。

× I enjoy taking photo from the car window, especially when the landscape is striking like dramatic skyline because I am fantastic about the sky.

✓ I enjoy taking photos from the car window, especially when the landscape is striking, like a dramatic skyline, because I am fascinated by the sky.

问题类型：动词+ing形式与名词复数及搭配错误。1) “taking photo”中“photo”应为复数“photos”。2) 句中缺少逗号并且搭配不当，应为“striking, like a dramatic skyline”。3) “I am fantastic about the sky”用法错误，正确表达可用“fascinated by the sky”。建议：名词复数要与动词搭配正确，使用合适的形容词或短语（fascinated by）表达喜好。

× When I was young, I used to perform the mountains because I enjoyed climbing climbing the mountains and it helped me keep healthy the sun when I ho no.

✓ When I was young, I used to prefer the mountains because I enjoyed climbing them and it helped me keep healthy. However, now I prefer the sea because the sound of the waves and the fresh sea breeze make me feel relaxed.

问题类型：过去时和句子结构错误。原句有多处问题：1) “used to perform the mountains”中“perform”用错，应为“prefer”。2) “climbing climbing”重复，删去重复并用代词“them”替代“the mountains”。3) “it helped me keep healthy the sun when I ho no.”这部分无意义且顺序混乱，应简化为“it helped me keep healthy”。4) 最后补全现在偏好的原因，原句末尾不完整。建议：使用正确动词prefer，避免单词重复，使用代词代替重复名词，并保持句子完整通顺。