Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và chính xác hơn; sửa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp, tránh câu lặp và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời "Yes" hoặc "No"; (2) Sửa lỗi từ vựng như "refer" -> "prefer", bỏ cụm thừa "next to the next"; (3) Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: cảnh đồng ruộng, núi, tán cây) và dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để kết nối ý.

例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the passing scenery relaxing. For example, I enjoy watching rolling fields and small villages, especially when driving through the countryside. It helps me unwind and think quietly.

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lỗi cấu trúc và từ thừa; sửa ngữ pháp và làm rõ ý. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng "Yes" hoặc "No"; (2) Sử dụng cấu trúc ngắn gọn: lý do + ví dụ; (3) Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất hoặc ví dụ về ảnh bạn chụp (màu sắc, khoảnh khắc), dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để liên kết ý.

例: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car because I love capturing interesting light and colours. For example, I usually photograph sunrise over fields or misty trees on a cool morning, then I organise the best shots when I get home.

提案: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, ngữ pháp chính xác và cung cấp lý do rõ ràng, có thể kèm ví dụ. Cụ thể: (1) Nói rõ "I prefer the sea"; (2) Sửa thì và danh từ số ít/đếm được (eg. "I was born" not "I were born"); (3) Giải thích vì sao với ví dụ cụ thể về cảm giác hoặc hoạt động (nghe sóng, đi dạo bờ biển), dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "since".

例: I prefer the sea because I find the sound of waves very calming. I was born in a mountainous area, so I am used to hills, but the sea helps me relax — I enjoy walking along the shore and listening to the waves.

× Personally, I usually travel by bus or car and refer the ship next to the next to the window to ensure the scenery.

✓ Personally, I usually travel by bus or car and sit next to the window to enjoy the scenery.

The original sentence uses incorrect verbs and phrases: 'refer the ship next to the next to the window' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct verb is 'sit' when describing a position next to a window, and 'enjoy the scenery' is the correct collocation. This fixes sentence structure and word choice. Suggestion: use simple, common verbs ('sit', 'look', 'enjoy') and check word order. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I'll find watching the passing landscape relaxing, especially when driving through the countryside.

✓ I find watching the passing landscape relaxing, especially when I travel through the countryside.

Using 'I'll find' suggests future but context is habitual preference; use present simple 'I find'. Also 'driving through the countryside' implies the speaker is driving; if meaning when traveling (by bus or car), use 'when I travel'. Ensure tense matches habitual action. Suggestion: use present simple for general statements about preferences. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Actually taking photos of the scenery outside the car is one of my hobbies and is it also the main reason why I choose to travel by bus or car.

✓ Actually, taking photos of the scenery outside the car is one of my hobbies and it is also the main reason I choose to travel by bus or car.

The sentence contains ungrammatical word order 'and is it also'—should be 'and it is also'. Also 'the main reason why I choose to travel' is wordy; 'the main reason I choose to travel' is more natural. Fix subject-verb order and remove unnecessary words. Suggestion: keep subject then verb ('it is') and avoid redundant 'why'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× From my point of view, I prefer to enjoy the sea of view than the mountains, as I were born in the region which is full of mountains and I find that seas, the means of sea, make my mind more relaxing.

✓ From my point of view, I prefer the view of the sea to the mountains, because I was born in a region full of mountains and I find the sea more relaxing.

Errors: 'prefer to enjoy the sea of view than' is incorrect collocation and comparison; use 'prefer A to B' and 'the view of the sea' or 'the sea' as noun. 'I were born' should be past simple 'I was born' (subject-verb agreement and past tense). Phrases 'seas, the means of sea' are nonsensical; simplify to 'I find the sea more relaxing.' Suggestions: use correct comparative structure 'prefer X to Y', use past simple for birth 'was born', and keep sentences concise. Grammar problem type ID: 25

× as I were born in the region which is full of mountains

✓ as I was born in a region that is full of mountains

The original uses 'were' with first person singular; the correct past tense is 'was'. Also 'the region which is full of mountains' is better as 'a region that is full of mountains' for natural English. Suggestion: use 'was born' for past events and use 'that' or 'which' appropriately; prefer 'that' in restrictive clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 5}]}Qed. Note: JSON strings use single quotes as requested. However JSON standard requires double quotes; but user demanded single quotes. I've followed instructions.