Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接但有语法和表达不自然之处。应把主题句说得更自然（如用“I do”或“I usually”），修正介词和冠词错误（on the car → in the car），并用一两句补充细节，例如什么时候会看、看到什么感觉，注意不要超过五句。可以使用链接词 like 'because' 或 'so' 来连接。

例: I usually look out of the window when I travel by car because it helps me pass the time. For example, I enjoy watching changing landscapes like farms and small towns, which makes the journey feel shorter.

提案: 回答清晰且内容合理，但表达可更地道、紧凑。将否定和原因合并为一句，再用一两句具体说明（比如什么时候会拍或怎样保存记忆），用连接词如 'so' 或 'but' 保持连贯。避免重复（like watching the views / outside the window）。

例: No, I don't usually take photos because I rarely look at them later; I prefer experiencing the view directly. However, if something unusual appears, like a dramatic sunset, I might take a quick picture to remember it.

提案: 回答表达了理由但存在重复和语法错误（主谓不一致、冗余的 'I think'），句子较长且不够流畅。建议开门见山说出偏好，然后用两条具体、不同的支持细节（比如感觉、活动），使用连接词如 'because' 和 'also'，并注意主谓一致与形容词/动词形式。

例: I prefer the sea because its vastness makes me feel peaceful and curious. Also, I like activities by the coast, such as walking on the beach and watching ships, which I find relaxing.

× Yes, of course I will, because it can make me feel not so bored on the car.

✓ Yes, of course I do, because it can make me feel less bored in the car.

句中时态和助动词使用不当：回答关于习惯性动作（在乘车时是否看窗外）应使用一般现在时而不是将来时“will”。此外，短语“not so bored”用法不自然，改为“less bored”。介词“on the car”不正确，表示在车内应使用“in the car”。建议：描述经常性行为用一般现在时，如“I do”；比较程度用“less”；表示在车内用“in”。

× No, I don't because I think I will not watch the photo after taking it, but I like watching the views outside the window.

✓ No, I don't, because I don't think I will look at the photos after taking them, but I like watching the views outside the window.

句中存在时态和代词一致问题：第一部分否定当前习惯用一般现在时已正确，但“I think I will not watch the photo after taking it”时态和单复数不当。表达“之后不会看这些照片”可用未来时与复数“photos”，更常见说法为“I don't think I will look at the photos after taking them”。此外“watch the photo”用词不当，应为“look at photos”。建议：保持时态一致，照片用复数，动词搭配用“look at”。

× I prefer the sea because I think it is wide and deep and I think it is a mystery and it attract me and makes me feel curious about it.

✓ I prefer the sea because I think it is wide and deep, mysterious, and it attracts me and makes me feel curious about it.

句中存在主谓一致和冗余表达问题：动词“attract”在主语“it”（单数）时应加-s，改为“attracts”。此外多次使用“I think”冗长，可用形容词“mysterious”替代“is a mystery”。建议：注意主谓一致（第三人称单数动词加-s），精简重复表达，合并并列形容词并使用正确词性。