Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有严重的语法和用词错误，导致考官无法理解。建议：1) 直接回答问题并给出主题句，例如“Yes, I often look out of the window.” 2) 使用简单清晰的句子补充理由或细节，例如说明喜欢看什么或什么时候看。3) 注意常用搭配：look out of the window, travel by bus/car, because/when/so。练习时多模仿正确句型并朗读。

例: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching the changing landscape because it helps me relax. For example, I like seeing fields and small villages on long bus journeys, especially in the countryside.

提案: 你的回答不是一个回答而是重复了问题，且词汇错误（series→scenery）。建议：1) 先说出是否拍照，例如“No, I don’t usually take photos.”或“Yes, sometimes I do.” 2) 解释原因并给出具体例子或频率。3) 注意常用表达：take photos of the scenery, from the window, because it’s blurry/often in motion。

例: No, I don't usually take photos of the scenery from a moving car because the pictures often turn out blurry. Occasionally, if we stop by a viewpoint, I will take a few clear photos of the landscape.

提案: 你的回答仍然是一个不完整的、错误的句子（did you perform ...）。建议：1) 直接给出偏好，例如“I prefer the mountains.”或“I prefer the sea.” 2) 说明理由并用具体细节支持，例如喜欢的活动或感受。3) 使用对比连接词如“because, while, whereas”来表达比较。

例: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the fresh air. While the sea is relaxing, I like the quietness and scenery of mountain trails, and I often go camping there on weekends.

× Do you love also window as a service when carrying by bus or car?

✓ Do you also like looking out of the window when travelling by bus or car?

原句中代词/短语使用不当，意思表达混乱： 1) “Do you love also window” 中的 love 用法和 also 放置不当，且“window”应与动词短语搭配，正确应为 like looking out of the window 或 enjoy the view. 2) “as a service” 无意义，应删除。 3) “when carrying by bus or car” 中 carry 用法错误，应使用被动或进行表方式的动词表述 travel、go 或 travelling。 改正建议：将主谓搭配调整为 like + doing（或 enjoy + 名词/动名词），also 放在助动词之后或动词前，使用 travelling by bus or car 表示“乘车/乘公共汽车时”。例如：Do you also like looking out of the window when travelling by bus or car?；多练习 like/enjoy + -ing 结构及副词 also 的位置。

× Do you take photos of the series outside the car window?

✓ Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?

原句中“series”用词错误，应该是“scenery（风景）”。这属于用词/代词选择错误，导致名词不准确。句子结构本身（Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?）是正确的。改正建议：注意听写和拼写，区分 series（系列）与 scenery（风景）；必要时查词典并确认上下文意思。

× Did you perform the mountains for the sea?

✓ Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?

原句中用词和时态均不合适： 1) “Did you perform” 使用了不相关的动词 perform（表演/执行），语义完全错误；应使用 prefer（更喜欢）。 2) 题干为一般现在时询问偏好，应该用 Do you prefer 而不是过去时 Did you。 改正建议：把动词改为表示偏好的 prefer，并使用一般现在时的疑问形式 Do you prefer ...?；平时练习常用动词的意思及时态用法。