Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题并提供1-2句具体原因或补充细节，使用连词连接句子。例如说明是否喜欢看风景、什么时候会看或不看，并改正时态和数的错误。练习将句子从口语草稿化为完整句子，如把“I usually sleeping”改为“I usually sleep”。

例: No, I usually sleep when I travel by bus or car because I find it tiring. However, if the journey is long and I’m awake, I sometimes look out to enjoy the view.

提案: 回答混乱且难以理解。建议先给出直接肯定或否定，然后用一两句清楚说明原因或条件，使用连词如“because”或“if”。注意时态一致和正确的词序，避免重复。可练习简单句并逐步加入连接词。

例: Not usually, because it is difficult to take clear photos from a moving car. If I am a passenger and the view is particularly beautiful, I sometimes take photos using my phone.

提案: 答案表达了偏好和理由，但句子断断续续、词汇和语法有错误。建议把主旨句放在开头，然后用1-2个连贯的支持句，用合适的形容词和短语（例如“feel free”，“relaxed”，“scenic views”）。注意句子完整性和连贯性。

例: I prefer the mountains because I feel more free and relaxed there. In the mountains I can enjoy peaceful walks and scenic views, which helps me unwind.

× No because in the bus or car I usually sleeping so I can't say sensory.

✓ No, because in the bus or car I am usually sleeping, so I can't see the scenery.

主谓一致和句子结构错误：原句中缺少适当的助动词和正确的动词形式。"I usually sleeping" 应为现在进行时或一般现在时的正确形式，如 "I am usually sleeping" 或 "I usually sleep"。此外，"say sensory" 完全不合适，应为表示看风景的动词短语 "see the scenery"。建议：使用正确的时态和动词短语（例如："I am usually sleeping" 或 "I usually sleep, so I can't see the scenery."）。

× Now I think it's very difficult for me when I was take photo in them outside I will in the sensories they I can take photo very easily.

✓ Now I think it's very difficult for me to take photos of them outside; when I am in the scenery I can take photos very easily.

时态与句子结构错误：原句混用了过去时和现在时，并且动词不定式和动名词使用不当（例如 "was take"、"in the sensories"）。改正后使用现在时态并改写为正确的动词短语："to take photos of them outside"（表示拍外面的他们/风景）和 "when I am in the scenery I can take photos very easily"。建议：保持时态一致，使用不定式作目的状语（"difficult for me to take photos"），并使用正确的名词 "scenery"。

× I like mountains because in the mountain I feel I'm very freedom and very. Relaxing and in the mountains I can see many views.

✓ I like mountains because in the mountains I feel very free and relaxed, and I can see many views.

单复数和形容词使用错误：原句中 "in the mountain" 与 "in the mountains" 混用，应统一为复数（一般说喜欢山时用复数）。"I'm very freedom" 是错误用法，名词 "freedom" 应换成形容词 "free"；"very. Relaxing" 断句并且应为形容词 "relaxed"（表示感到放松）。建议：使用复数形式 "in the mountains"，用形容词描述感受（"feel very free and relaxed"），并合并句子使其流畅。