Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 在回答中注意语法与表达的自然性，减少重复并增强结构清晰度。可直接给主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意冠词和时态（如“look out of the window”或“look out the window”用法一致），避免不必要的重复（如“I really like do this”应为“I really like doing this”）。

例: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, I like noticing small villages, fields and trees passing by, which helps me relax and feel connected to nature.

提案: 回答要直接且语法准确，说明原因时用清晰短句并避免错误词汇（如“wild wheels”、“cinema”显然用词不当）。可以说明是否用手机、何时会拍照，并用连词使句子连贯。

例: Not usually, because I don't carry a camera or use my phone to take pictures when I'm on the move. If I had a camera or if the view was extraordinary, I would definitely try to capture it.

提案: 回答需要更流畅和具体，减少口头填充词（uh）并给出具体原因或描述来支持观点。改用更准确表达如“mountain views”或“a mountain setting”。同时使用连接词（because, for example）让逻辑更清楚。

例: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the quiet and the wide views. For example, hiking to a high viewpoint helps me clear my mind and offers panoramic scenery that I find more inspiring than the sea.

× I really like do this.

✓ I really like doing this.

原句中動詞短語“like do”結構不正確。英語中“like”表示喜好時，後面常接動名詞（doing）或不定式（to do）；但在此語境下更自然用動名詞。建議將“do”改為動名詞“doing”。（簡體中文）

× No, certainly I didn't like to take photos of the wild wheels because I don't have a camera.

✓ No, certainly I didn't like taking photos of the wild views because I didn't have a camera.

句子中時間軸不一致：前半句使用過去時“didn't like”，而後半句用現在時“don't have a camera”，應保持時態一致。此外“wild wheels”顯然為錯誤詞語，應為“wild views”或“scenery”。同時“like to take photos”可改為“like taking photos”。因此將後半句改為過去時“didn't have a camera”。（簡體中文）

× It is a very important reason.

✓ That is a very important reason.

此句中指代前文的原因時，應使用指示代詞“that”而非非特指的“it”。這樣能更清楚地表達“那個原因”。（簡體中文）

× If I have a cinema, I really like to do it, yeah.

✓ If I had a camera, I would really like to do it.

原句中“cinema（電影院）”用錯，應為“camera（相機）”。此外條件句使用與事實相反的語氣，應用虛擬語氣“if I had... I would...”。因此把“have a cinema”改為“had a camera”，並改變主句為“would really like”。（簡體中文）

× Yes, actually I always like to look out the windows to see the world well, because I think it is very beautiful and I can feel the wild atmosphere.

✓ Yes, actually I always like to look out the window to see the world, because I think it is very beautiful and I can feel the wild atmosphere.

“look out the windows”中“windows”可用單數“window”作習慣說法“look out the window”。“see the world well”不自然，簡化為“see the world”。其餘表達可保留。建議使用單數習慣用法，使句子更地道。（簡體中文）

× So I think I prefer the mountains view than the sea view.

✓ So I think I prefer the mountain view to the sea view.

比較結構用法錯誤：英語中表達偏好時常用“prefer A to B”而不是“prefer A than B”。此外“mountains view”應為“mountain view”或“the mountains”視語境而定。此處改為“mountain view to the sea view”。（簡體中文）

× Probably I prefer the mountains because I really like to sit on the, uh, tall, tall area because it can give me more, uh, spirit, uh, view about the world culture.

✓ Probably I prefer the mountains because I really like to sit in high places; they can give me a broader view of world culture.

原句存在多處問題：介詞用法（sit on the tall area 不自然，應為 sit in high places/sit on high ground）、冠詞與名詞搭配（a broader view 更自然）、“spirit, view about the world culture”語序混亂，應表達為“a broader view of world culture”。因此重組句子，使語法和語義更通順。建議使用“sit in high places”或“on high ground”並使用“a broader view of world culture”。（簡體中文）